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These Sorrows

Can you feel my tears they are flowing like the wind heavy like these burdens that I carry oh too well Even the thriving of my heart has felt me struggle But now I await as my world is cluttered as a bundle i can hardly see ahead I feel as if I am blind My head hurts from all the pain and my fingertips are numb Just hoping that soon it'll all be over before this life of mine is done Wanting these things that I cannot have choosing the wrong path that my feet has chosen to bare picking up others pieces and forgetting about my own I see now what use to be my problem is now of something I've grown Some sorrows I can forget some I will carry to my grave And no matter what the reasons are I will never deliver the blame I have no friends and know of no one trying to figure out if that one happy moment in my life has won This battle that I carry so well and these tears that are flowing like the wind I have put behind me and shall never carry another burden again This life that I walk with pride I can see straight through another fools eye so now I'm living and my eyes and heart have not yet cried

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 9:41:00 PM
this is so sad and heartfelt, there is so much emotion in this piece, I can feel it. your words are profound. ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:20:00 PM
this is very powerful and i can relate to this it is nice to know i have not been alone in my painful life journey...good write thanks for expressing such powerful words-rhonda hero
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