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These Shadows

Shadows remind of you These grey black deep shallow hues Beneath the eaves beside the big trees They almost silently whisper As I want to kiss her She disappears As we come and go here and there Red or green or blue or grey or a combination Shadows always roam with us everywhere every time Sometimes latent some other time Eloquently reminding ‘We were’ We shudder Some men and women all on a sudden Turn shadowy, tall short huge slender shadows Time robs them of their existence Just the shadows wander Man makes friend with man Shadow-person makes friends with shadow-person By the side of your smiling face Beside your crimson and golden fireplace The shadows appear and sadden our thoughts Apples turn pale damp and rot In our lonely reverie Assembly of dark spots We cannot do without Our dear shadows Today or tomorrow Residuals of our bone marrow Look there at the two fondling larks Do they know One may be shadow tomorrow Fondling is life Shadow, a knife _______________________________________ 15/11/2016

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Date: 11/19/2016 1:19:00 PM
At least we can (hopefully) learn from the shadows. They can remind us of what we have to do to keep our lives in order. I wish more people new that fact. You are wonderful.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poems and expressing reaction ....
Date: 11/17/2016 10:45:00 AM
nice and truly said.......nice to read
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/17/2016 4:58:00 AM
- "Shadows always roaming with us everywhere everytime" ... a excellent description, Probir - A really wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/17/2016 4:53:00 AM
Another great poem Probir well written x Great words x
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/16/2016 12:20:00 PM
mystically rendered; breathtaking work, probir... i like this!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you, nette ...
Date: 11/16/2016 9:40:00 AM
Par excellence Probir! Love 'residuals of our bone marrow'...shadows lurk in every corner of our lives.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you, Paloma ...
Date: 11/15/2016 10:16:00 AM
this is v-e-r-y good, Probir, enjoyed reading Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/15/2016 8:22:00 AM
A fantastic poem of profound character that captivates the heart and mind dear, Probir! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/15/2016 7:58:00 AM
There is a delicate veil that separates life from shadow and with surgeon-like precision you have revealed both. Well done my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 12:07:00 PM
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Date: 11/15/2016 7:32:00 AM
Love your poem, Probir, especially the line "eloquently reminding 'we were'". Agnes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes
Date: 11/15/2016 6:19:00 AM
Very poignant and deep, Probir! A great read. love the ending too.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 11:35:00 AM
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