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These Hands

Amani the peaceful warrior A woman who risked her life To save mothers and daughters from the notorious war crimes Deep in the jungles of Congo The continuing human rights violence The rape, the discrimination and the children armies The non stop crisis that seemed to worsen with each dawn Amani the peaceful warrior established safety homes for the victims Through varying trainings the mothers and daughters were taught farming, knitting, cooking, simple medical training, arts and crafts and many more With counseling she gave back the victims the power they had lost Their smiles grew, their hearts shone A rose garden was planted to show this victory And as the smiles grew, so did it They heard of Amani and in one of her rescue missions, she was captured Her hands and legs were tied He said, "these hands have to go" To humiliate her and her course To destroy her and her dreams But even as she left, her legacy lived beyond the pain and the torture. *Fictional*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2015 2:51:00 PM
Njeri, a 7 from me, Amani your fictional heroine cud very well be real.. We have all heard of the atrocities of war and child soldiers, i have had fred who were childsoldiers in sudan and the stories are devastating... God bless
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 3:29:00 PM
its very sad. thank you Lewis. God bless you
Date: 9/24/2015 8:01:00 AM
A true warrior, this one. loved it. "peace" is elusive and each must play their part for a better tomorrow. well penned Njeri.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 3:28:00 PM
thank you Marion. I appreciate the visit. God bless you
Date: 9/21/2015 7:12:00 PM
What a great Epic.she is indeed a great thought people like her might scarce these days but there some are people out there who are willing to sacrifice for their brothers and sisters. However If everyone can be like her there will be no bad acts at all A fav and a 7! for this wonderful and excellent write.........A.M.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 3:27:00 PM
thank you Afolabi. I appreciate the visit. God bless you
Date: 9/21/2015 2:41:00 AM
Although you label the poem as fictional it is true every single word in essence, dear N. H.! The virtue of Amani can be found in many souls. As for the victims we know it is true! Congratulations for writing on the subject! ?7.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 3:25:00 PM
thank you Demetrios. I appreciate the visit. God bless you
Date: 9/20/2015 7:29:00 PM
Great poem, even if only fictional my friend. Expressed the courage and hope in standing up to defend the helpless . Sacrifice comes in many forms but each giving of self that deeply, lovingly is a hero. A7, deserves a super ten.. Keep on writing! AS IN YOUR WRITING YOU ARE DOING SAME.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/3/2015 3:23:00 PM
thank you Robert. I appreciate the visit. God bless you

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