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THE VOICE OF APPRECIATION

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME. (C)

My dearest troubled humans, This is the bitter voice of Appreciation of old that You are hearing The one that, once upon a time, people much revered But The younger generations seem not even to know My name. - I remember When all of you, on your lips my name had When: Children constantly appreciated what Their parents for them were doing - Students were thankful for what their Teachers were teaching - Citizens grateful were for what their State for them was providing - People thanksgivings were offering to God and nature alike for taking care of Their needs And that Statues were erected everywhere in my honor. - Now, my name, As though forbidden to be pronounced, Obliterated from your memory appears to be Thus Each one of you only to himself gives credit Forgetting that Without the contributions of those that came before you, Yourselves wild animals would be, Lacking language, sciences, and numbers, Just ignorant brutes striving in the wilderness to Survive - Beware, My beloved humans, For If the road of ingratitude you keep following for long, Sooner or later, Back into the wilderness, your egotistic selves, Inescapably you will find! - - © Demetrios Trifiatis 30 July 2016 -

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Date: 7/30/2016 12:59:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, You gave "voice" appreciation. I heard your message loud and clear. I must say that I agree. Excellent job! A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/30/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thanking you for your support dearest, Alexis! You very kind!
Date: 7/30/2016 11:26:00 AM
- I found the word .... : -> ingratitude !!! - And that is what it's all about - we use and throw away, everything that is learned from humans beginning here on earth - Disrespectful and mindless - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/30/2016 1:28:00 PM
The word exists in my poem my dearest Anne-Lise were I say: "If the road of ingratitude you keep following for long..." I would like to thank you from my heart for your visits and comments!
Date: 7/30/2016 5:58:00 AM
Apropos of what victor says, How Armageddon if none for 'good' and all is evil ... While accepting the frustration of ours, the older generation, at the 'egotistic selves', we must accept also that stress and strain of life have multiplied shockingly bringing about obvious change in the value-pattern ... It is better to avoid the wordy avenue and stay in your roof garden ...
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Date: 7/30/2016 6:08:00 AM
Ah my friend, Probir, it seems you do not wish me interfere in your wordy avenue for you wish to let continue what is going on, namely, the change of value patterns even though they eventually lead to catastrophe! Well, I have lived the "wordy avenue more vividly than you ever could imagine. Anyway I will stay on my roof garden but still I will send down my thunderbolts!

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