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Perfect waist, high heel taste, buns galore, body tour.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 2:57:00 AM
    Hmmm... sounds delectable... Terry (and thanks for the clever comment!)

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 4:46:00 PM
    Lovely vision indeed, really enjoyed this short piece......

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Had me chuckling with this poem. No need for glasses on this one. ha ha love phyl

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:44:00 PM
    Never get tired of this one, just a great tour with 9 words.

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 12:14:00 PM
    self servce. giving her the once over.

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Interesting work that leaves me with questions..I no longer can wear those high heels unless I wear them seated in a wheel chair and some push me ...Sara

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 7:29:00 AM
    This is kinda intimate, I think.. which really sweet. glad to read thi.. Enjoyed this a lot.

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:36:00 PM
    That's for describing me so well Situation! J/K-very clever!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Sounds like one sexy lady! Nicely rhymed :)

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    Date: 2/1/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Natalie TRR
  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:06:00 AM
    sounds more like a dream of yours haha just kiddin. an 87 yr old man calls me hot foot. has just lost his wife, thinks he's in love with me as I walk by, the people are really nice to me here in this lil' ville, so I'm staying, retiring and writing here for free, who cares. I'm just basic, I walk 1 or 2 miles a day but hate heels, I have a 71/2 E shoe size, moccassins perfence but like the nikes, or believe it or not sketchers...:)

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 11:39:00 AM
    oh so cool this Monoku Situation .. great rhyme sequence to enhance that visual luv..

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:32:00 PM
    Saddle up darling; I'm waiting! :)

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Very well done my friend. oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 10:36:00 PM
    Hmmmm Yes indeed a vision. Good job and very clever. God Bless,. JB

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 10:10:00 PM
    Wow this is very clever- I enjoyed your vision, Bren : )

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:41:00 PM
    Re your sweet comment: love hasn't been all that kind to me either on the other hand there have been some wonderful highs. Like bees to a flower, it somehow is irresistable when it presents itself! :) P S Do you have a name?

    Date: 1/25/2012 8:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You can call me Situation.
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:07:00 PM
    Cool monoku!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:39:00 PM
    ???? ha ha! I see a woman in this one, how about you? Nice tour you are on my friend; the description defies the imagination! Luv, Lizzie

    Date: 1/26/2012 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not a tranny!
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Hahaha, I love the way that you took farm animals and twisted our imaginations with them; kudos ˜ John!:) ˜

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    Date: 1/25/2012 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry