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The Truth

Stupid is the Woman, Who thinks her man is an Angel. Worst still is the Man, Who thinks his woman is a Virgin ! Truth is a Treasure, But you must never, Tell your sweet lover, What is gone Forever. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/29/2013 9:28:00 AM
This is a cool piece. Maybe like feminism clashing with misogyny. The last stanza is short and sweet and brings the whole thing home well. Good job; I liked this piece. Kudos! :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 5:04:00 PM
i like the way you described it i just write what flows out my main focus is that is has to sound nice. thanks

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