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The Token- Angel Contest

I see you bent low Your head in your hands Tears dropping on the table cloth The heavy sighs that no one can hear Fill my ear Even past the wall Between eternity and finite time I hear I see Your guardian angel is near My orders from the throne To protect you from harm Physical….spiritual To guard your steps Yet...I see you have not walked For many an hour You have been glued to that spot Unmoving Only knowing that your universe Is caving in Forming a black hole That is sucking in your soul The decision is mine to make I have no time to hesitate… Overstep my bounds? Or just hover and watch you drown? The room fills with light As I materialize Hiding my wings Not wanting to shock you Not in your present state... But you are too far gone to see The gun on the table…ready So, with one hand I touch your face With the other under your grizzled chin I make you look up at me…. Your eyes fill with wonder You blink away the tears Trying to focus Trying to grasp the reality of me Before you have time to question I close my lips on yours And breathe into your mouth The eternal qualities of heaven Peace, joy, love and light…. A lingering kiss of life The moment where heaven and earth collide And I unfold my wings and envelope you In a cocoon of heavenly wonder I enfold you I feel your strength returning I will not let you fall I have heard the unspoken call Of your bleeding heart… And as you reach your arms around me… In that moment…I’m gone Clothing myself with invisibility Yet…. just as near Unseen to your mortal eyes But as real As the erratic beating of your heart I hover near You exhale slowly Your breath is on my cheek The light dims And you open your eyes Wondering what delirium Has come over you Yet there….there in your hand A token of the encounter A white feather That glimmers in the night Against orders…. I will stand before the throne And try to find the words to explain This strange act... I could not keep back I had to guard your life In the only way I knew how In that unearthly moment in time I will find the grace to answer My reward… the look in your eyes The radiance of your face The knowing smile that reveals You are worthy enough On a dark and hopeless night To be kissed…. By the lips of an angel A guardian angel of light For Skat's Angel Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/3/2015 9:23:00 AM
Nope, I am honored.
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:39:00 AM
I felt like I read it for the first time. This is such a special piece Eileen. You should repost this one!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2015 7:58:00 AM
Only if I can title it....At Richard's Request. Do you mind? ;)
Date: 6/25/2013 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful! I absolutely love this poem.
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. Connie
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Date: 6/24/2013 3:50:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:36:00 AM
How cute, lovely and beautiful your verse is. I love it so much Eileen. Many Congrats to you. Well done. AO
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Date: 6/23/2013 3:00:00 PM
Eileen -Congratulations on being named this year's winner, and thanks for sharing it, George
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Date: 6/23/2013 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/23/2013 8:11:00 AM
:) Richard....thank you!!!!!
Date: 6/23/2013 6:41:00 AM
This is a well deserved win, my fallen angel didn't make the cut*lol* I was concerned it may be a little to risqué.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/23/2013 7:24:00 AM
Yes....I'm disappointed! I was looking for your name on the list of winners...I always do! :) It doesn't matter because it's a winner in my book!
Date: 6/22/2013 10:08:00 PM
Eileen. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/23/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thanks for sponsoring the contest. You stretched our imagination on this topic! :)
Date: 6/22/2013 4:51:00 PM
Stunning write on a visitation, this story unfolded like the wings of an angel. It has to be good to render Donna speechless lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/23/2013 7:25:00 AM
Richard...your post unfolds in the same way....How beautiful! Thank you! :) Guardian Angels are very real and very dear....
Date: 6/22/2013 1:02:00 PM
Uuuuuuhhhhh...speechless....:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 1:15:00 PM
Thanks my sweet darling MD....
Date: 6/22/2013 12:54:00 PM
This is superb! Touches the soul and warms the heart! I love it! Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 12:55:00 PM
HEE HEE! So much so that you posted twice???? Hugs, Cecilia! :)
Date: 6/22/2013 12:54:00 PM
This is superb! Touches the soul and warms the heart! I love it! Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 1:14:00 PM
:)
Date: 6/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
May your guardian angel carry you to the worlds of beauty and happiness unknown to mortals! Ethereal and angelic verse that uplifts the soul! Good luck!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, my dear poet.
Date: 6/22/2013 8:50:00 AM
We should all have such a valiant guardian angel. Beautifully rendered. And thank you for your kind words. Love, Joyce
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 12:17:00 PM
:) Thanks for the visit, Joyce...the pleasure is all mine to be visited by such a wonderful poetess! Hugs!
Date: 6/22/2013 8:27:00 AM
Simply breathtaking! I will be surprised if this is not at the top of the list, simply breathtaking.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/23/2013 7:22:00 AM
It isn't, Richard.... :( But your vote of confidence is precious! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/22/2013 12:16:00 PM
:) Richard.... :) :) :) :) :) because words fail me.

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