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The Sun Sinks Blood Red

the sun sinks blood red. . . in the trunk of his car her fading cries

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/29/2014 10:36:00 AM

A crime that is happening. Gives you a shudder to think of that scene. Nice senryu.love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 10:48:00 AM

ps...wow! What's going on in this senryu... Seems, like a crime.... I posted a new poem... Enjoy it when you have time.. xox ~Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 10:46:00 AM

Hello, Andrea... How are you? I was smiling because, you read my Brokeback Mountain poem... LOL.. Out of all the ones you could have read... hehehehe... PD

Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 8:51:00 PM

good one Andrea, xox~ SKAt

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2014 4:14:00 PM

wow,, very visual, andie.. cheers to you for your shining win!.. huggs

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2014 12:28:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrrea

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:32:00 AM

congrats on win hugs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:28:00 AM

so much from so few words Andrea excellent pen Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2014 10:01:00 AM

Way to go..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/20/2014 7:21:00 PM

Dark and powerful image. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Huberta Van Akkeren

Date: 2/20/2014 5:18:00 PM

Wow very powerful I agree with Ruben a story in just three well worded lines Congrats on your win

Gary Watkins

Date: 2/20/2014 10:53:00 AM

Ooh, I love this one, Andrea! Very dramatic and sinister. Congratulations on the win.

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 1/27/2014 9:41:00 PM

metal chairs painted in the desert. stacked outside a bar. green and red remind me of these fading cries. So sad and sanguine. ~Kilmer

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/24/2014 7:24:00 AM

Oh my! These few lines pack a monster punch. Sad and powerful.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/23/2014 3:36:00 PM

wow, love this!!

Erich Goller

Date: 1/22/2014 10:17:00 PM

that's an emotional expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2014 7:18:00 PM

I hope the car was not sinking to the bottom of a lake! Good write as usual, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/23/2014 7:43:00 PM

that would be better for her than what he probably has planned!! But she is almost dead anyway.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/20/2014 8:39:00 PM

A very dramatic and haunting poem. You've got so much impact here with just a few lines. Really well done, Andrea!...This reminds me of the song, "Stan" by Eminem...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2014 1:04:00 AM

Chilling Andrea. Very impressive!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2014 5:26:00 PM

- Andrea ::::::: B R A V O !! - W O O o o W !!!!!!! - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/18/2014 2:22:00 PM

This is why I click the channel, it's just too much to take. The horror's in life our fellow man some how seems to partake. But when the echoes of her breath have stained our human hearts. Let's hope that someday's coming soon when evil finally parts. Peace. :)

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2014 12:29:00 PM

wow... love it! SKAT

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/17/2014 6:28:00 PM

yikes! you've conveyed absolute terror in just a few words - amazing!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/17/2014 5:54:00 PM

the picture of her terror sends shivers down my spine Andrea superb imagery Shadow x smile hug

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/17/2014 4:23:00 PM

O...Ow orrible Andrea; L O L 'specially if it was a european car..' i mean the boot is so small..'