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The Specific Ocean

The point is dull upon the spear, But still it pierced my greatest fear- That this pain will always worsen (My sinking ship so wayward steered) Through the Ocean of my person Toward a vortex, alas! Am veered! I'll sail to Hell- cursed excursion! But, lo! An island doth appear- The sea doth swell; to Her a burden My Vessel and I; 'tis clear! 'Tis clear! That She vows for our submersion, Crashing upon the rocks rushed near Shipwrecked! Incurred Her incursion! When She, so once to me endeared- How I wish a diff'rent version Of our tale that endeth here... *HEART OF THE SEA CONTEST ENTRY

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Date: 9/30/2013 6:41:00 PM
Another well written one in your most unique style. Very visually entertaining and captivating :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 9:24:00 AM
<3 Thanks, hon :)
Date: 9/11/2013 7:54:00 PM
Fan of your rhythm
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Date: 9/12/2013 9:31:00 AM
Thanks; I hope the words hold some significance though, also lol
Date: 9/11/2013 3:14:00 PM
Magnificent...wish Id written it..lol. BG
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:24:00 PM
That's such a sweet compliment; it warms my heart. Thank you, BG :)

Book: Shattered Sighs