The Soul of the Universe

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Look She stares Do you see? The face of humanity? The universe wrapped in two eyes The devil needs no spies Humanity has no disguise

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Arlene Smith

Date: 2/25/2015 4:36:00 PM

WOW!! WOW!!.. 7 for this powerful, incredible write, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 9:37:00 PM

Thank you Arlene, this is very kind of you!

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/21/2015 8:38:00 PM

Thought provoking write and picture. Humanity--the good and the bad, which shall prevail? A7 on this one my friend, enjoyed the read...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/21/2015 11:17:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/18/2015 8:29:00 AM

Dear Arthur, Love pic my friend and yes I love this being we able to put pictures with my poems it's fun. Love your poem it is thought provoking, the last lines go so well with the pic, great choices here. Humanity is a frail species, but we think that we are bullet proof beyond the realm of extinction. But we are so wrong on this notion, I just hope we wake up before it's to late, cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Cherl, wake up? Sometimes I prefer dreamland!! Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 2/16/2015 4:41:00 PM

So sad...I see it dying more and more each day

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:41:00 PM

As dark as I write, we see what we choose to see, sort of the cup is half empty or half full! Somehow we seem to move forward and in the darkest moments, sometimes we see humanity at its best!!