The Slut's Surprise

THE ****'S SURPRISE Saucy Spring Resenting relingquishment to her sunny sister-- Left in a huff Over her shoulder, Slung snow crystals With a ferocious Exactitude Crushing the rosy hopes of Apples-- vulnerable in their Fragile state of bloom Victoria Anderson-Throop 2013

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/22/2013 6:03:00 PM

Hilarious title, and beautifully worded; thanks for the cool and interesting read :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 8/26/2013 4:04:00 PM

you are the first to comment on the title...this is a title that I love, too....maybe some of us have a quirky sense of humor, eh? Thanks for the positive reinforcement...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/2/2013 1:00:00 AM

Another gem and the reason I love reading your poems. They give me such joy! Mahalo

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 5/2/2013 3:23:00 AM

thanks Connie, this one was fun to write!

Okologo Uche Ken

Date: 5/1/2013 7:52:00 AM

Good work with a real professional touch. Pls I don't mind if you mentor me and take me through the rudiments of poetry. I personal love poetry but it is not in line with my career or study. Thanks.

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 5/2/2013 3:27:00 AM

Will put you on my list of those to read and comment on....have patience with me, though, my internet here in alaska is very slow! (glad you liked this poem, it was fun to write!)