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The Sky

I saw a glimpse of gold while flying in the sky. I saw a glimpse of life while flying in the sky, I saw a glimpse of serenity while flying in the sky, I saw a maddening joy in the sky, I felt a never experienced delight in the sky, As if the sun had spread a golden carpet for me to walk on the rustling white silk clouds, As if the clouds had come together to form mountains for me to climb, As if the sky showed some extra shades of blue to decorate the royal heavenly ceiling, I felt, as if a veteran painter had painted this magnificent scene to mesmerize my wondrous eyes. Thousands of feet above the land, I felt more at home, in the sky. The Sky - where there is no limit to rise, Where the evening gold of the sun melts and the diamond studded blacks of the night sky rule the world. With such great comrades who would never leave my side, I felt more at home high above. I felt more connected to the immortal sun painted with hues of red, the silver moon that never fails to glow, the clouds stretched as the carpets of heaven, Than to the dynamic, duplicitous mortal beings. My freedom, I realized. Blessed are the birds who stay high above and cherish the luxuries of nature.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/12/2016 11:57:00 PM
Oh what a sensation flying...but sky diving gives me such a fright!I hope one day I'll get the courage to try it and enjoy the sensation everyone shares with me!Congrats :D
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:20:00 PM
REY, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2016 8:02:00 PM
Reya, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:47:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
Nature just knows. And I liked "luxuries of nature." What a unique phrase and concept. You know, you could write another using that as a title, and focus on other senses, touch, sounds, tastes... Welcome to Soup, Reya. It may take a bit of time to become familiar with its features, but soon you'll find your way. Cheers, Cyndi
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