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The Shepherd's Proclaimed!

We were in the field, Tending our sheep. All was so quiet, We were falling asleep! In the blink of an eye, The sky turned so bright! All the angels appeared, We trembled with fright! Glory to God in the highest, The host of angels did sing! The news of the Messiah's birth, To us they did bring. Born in the City of David, And in a manger He lay. He's wrapped in pieces of cloth, You will find Him this way. So off we went to, Search for this child. Who was born this night, In a way so meek and mild. We were struck with awe, As we came to the place! We felt so unworthy, To even gaze upon His face! So humbled by the fact, The angels gave us this news. We are just shepherds, The lowliest of Jews! But with joy overflowing, We sang praises in the street! We began telling the Good News, To everyone we would meet! Then back to the field to, Tend the sheep we went. Praising God for our Messiah, And the night's events He had sent!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:24:00 AM
Neal - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:14:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:38:00 PM
Neal - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:52:00 PM
Hi Neal Congrats on your poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/20/2008 2:04:00 AM
Dear Neal, Lovely recounting of that blessed event. Congratulations on your feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 8/18/2008 1:23:00 PM
The humble are often blessed beyond their imagination.
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:12:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme in this inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:07:00 PM
Neal - This is a truly blessed poem of a truly blessed event - Congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations Neal on having your poem featured! Nicole
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Date: 8/18/2008 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations Neal on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 8/18/2008 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations Neal on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations Neal on your heart warming poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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