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The Secret Key

The secret key with which , The lock of your heart to open, at last, I Have found, Thus The chains that kept you hostage of the past, With my kisses, I shall smash for to let Your love unbound! © Demetrios Trifiatis 23 August 2015

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/28/2015 3:50:00 AM

Lovely and romantic piece, my dear poet.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2015 8:13:00 AM

There is indeed freedom that comes from loving and being loved in return.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/25/2015 8:16:00 AM

Whatever I write, Richard, my friend is not just writing! I think you already know that. Thank you for appreciating it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2015 3:28:00 PM

ahh, so this is epigram. Very nice. I enjoyed the patterning of this one.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/25/2015 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea, so kind of you to comment!

David Meade

Date: 8/23/2015 9:40:00 PM

Awesome! and once love is unbound it changes the world! 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 12:58:00 AM

So wonderful to see you again, David, my friend. Thank you so much for visiting!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/23/2015 1:30:00 PM

I could use that secret from time to time.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 1:00:00 AM

There are no secrets for you, dear Tim. You know everything when comes to love! Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/23/2015 7:46:00 AM

Wonderful write with lots of emotion :) a 7 hugs Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 1:04:00 AM

Writing about love without emotion is impossible, dear Eve, I think you agree with it! Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2015 6:58:00 AM

oh how romantic Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 1:06:00 AM

Jan, thank you for characterizing it this way. Love and romance go together, don't they? Thank you again!