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The Seasons of My Favorite Front Yard Tree

At its zenith, its strong lush limbs embrace the summer’s birds. It flames scarlet -then tangerine - till extinguished by late fall’s chill. Fragrant perfect buds burst forth in radiant white at Easter time. For Debbie Guzzi's Trinity Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/12/2012 2:22:00 PM
I found one I'd missed, lol - I wondered if there were any. Beautiful write, my friend - so glad to see it was a winner
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win on this awesome poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:02:00 PM
Nice little win Andrea... always~ pd
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Date: 11/9/2012 2:05:00 PM
A tree for all seasons. I love trees. This one sounds special. Love, daver
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Andrea- Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:34:00 PM
Couldn't chose between you SO glad to give you a #1 win. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:05:00 AM
congratulations on your win friend Andrea. I didn't try this form yet...well I'm still new in the world of poetry. Anyway, its indeed a winner!!!! so creative..cheers!! (^_^)
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Date: 11/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
A charming poem to describe the seasons, Andrea. At long last, we are back to square one. The issue of word "fries" remains unresolved so it remains un-edited. As I have love and respect for you I will make a last attempt of consulting a good Rhyming Dictionary to see finally a rhyming word even close in meaning of what I am wanting to convey. Changing the rhyme scheme will be a murder of an aesthetically charming Quatrain. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
A charming poem to describe the seasons, Andrea. At long last, we are back to square one. The issue of word "fries" remains unresolved so it remains un-edited. As I have love and respect for you I will make a last attempt of consulting a good Rhyming Dictionary to see finally a rhyming word even close in meaning of what I am wanting to convey. Changing the rhyme scheme will be a murder of an aesthetically charming Quatrain. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:02:00 AM
This poem is beautifully penned dear.. I love the way you're describing the seasons here.. and you made me yearn for Easter time :)
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:00:00 AM
My member area seems fine and even posting,but don't worry.At times it happened to me too and then shortly afterwards got adjusted on its own dear
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Date: 11/5/2012 11:59:00 PM
Hi dear..i didn't tell you re my birth..Ow gee..i didn't realize its been so long since i last was here.My baby is really active and leaving completely Opeless :)..I'm being too tired to do anything more than taking care of her and the house..She hardly sleeps both night and day.She was born before my due date on 27th August,I had a long labour ,eleven hrs :),then ended up having a C-section .My daughter was born so tiny,but now thank God she can't stop drinking :).How are you?
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Date: 11/5/2012 5:06:00 PM
I liked Sijo poem. A tree beautiful in all seasons. Thanks for sharing your poem Andrea. And thank for the lovely comment on 'Changing Seasons'. Smiles, Prouder
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Date: 11/1/2012 2:27:00 PM
Nice sijo, Andrea,, reading this for the 3rd time.. maybe I will get it the next time i stop by... LOL..kidding... I like the imaginary point that glides around the birds and the nature awaiting every season around your favorite tree....((and yes you have read my "WEIRD SCIENCE " in the past)) thank you always~pd
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:10:00 PM
Andrea, stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:37:00 PM
Seems like you have a great front yard Andrea, Pleasure to read today.."
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:10:00 PM
QUITE BREATHTAKING ANDREA .. A PROGRESSION OF THE TREE TOLD FLAWLESSLY LUV .. GOOD LUCK .. HOPE U CAN VISIT MY BLOG LATER TODAY ..
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Date: 10/30/2012 10:37:00 PM
Andrea I hope that your beloved "Front Yard Tree" survived the hurricane's wrath. A beautiful write my friend all the best in the contest. One love, Joy Wells.
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:17:00 PM
Wow, Andrea...makes me want to know what kind of tree it is!...A real gem you have here! - Tim
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:46:00 PM
All 3 lines are wonderful, Andrea! Such a nice entry...U are gonna have to show me some pics of your rose bushes next yr...hope all is going well today...i emailed u yesterday a lg file..let me know if u didn't get it...gwendolen :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:00:00 PM
nicely penned Andrea....best wishes....love
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Date: 10/30/2012 12:18:00 PM
Trees are like the nerve endings, or beginings, of the earth's body - I would like to reincarnated as a tree, far away from factories - I love to see the trees' bark deveopl that patina mold - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful!! I love the words you chose to describe the leaf fade...
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