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Atop The Table 'an empty verse' and empty hands ~understand~ The glass in hand can drown out ten- thousand and ten; Hearts, ~emptiness~ ' ' looking for ? a f l o w e r '' '' ' ' ' " " , ', ', (Oh, Holy Nights) on bend-ed knee enlightened to see, Ten Drops from the Glass < << < << < << < I ponder great love and then I let it go (Boomerang) Hands, (the) Masters Hand * * * * * * * * * A parade o'er Parodies' "'atop'" "The Table" Inspired by a reply to comment: 3/6/2012 ~ "Slowly Ascending The Steps Unto Once Upon A Times Familar Front Door~ Seems As Though But Yesterday When It's Newness Held Such Vibrancy, Colours & Laughter~ Love Filled The Hallways Leading Into Many Different Rooms; Some Were Hidden~ A Vacancy Sign Now Posted Upon The Curtainless Window; Inside My Heart~ Spring Melting These The Last Winters Remnants Of Snow Left Amid The Blizzard~ Winds Whispering Through The Trees; Flowers Bending In This Their Wake~ With A Single Rose Sitting Atop An Empty Table Past The Glass, Aside A Note~ Time, Beckoning From The Street; Leaving A Bottle Of Champagne At The Threshold~ Wrapped With A Red Bow And Turning To Make My Way; Beyound The Rainbows." Love John!:)

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Date: 10/23/2013 9:09:00 PM
Cindy, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 11:02:00 PM
wow..this is awesome... . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Very Creative work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 10/17/2013 5:44:00 PM
So, Did I Actually Write Any Of Those Words Noted At The Conclusion Be This Your Lovely As Somewhat Fascinating Within Creative's Verse, Sweet Precious Lucinda Price ? If True Then I Am Going To Pretend That I did And Post It With a Slight Brush Today ~ Love The Layout And Have A Very Beautiful Day ~ A Rose At Her Threshold, And Here We Wait, Love, John
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Date: 10/15/2013 3:29:00 PM
the art you give ! Beauty inside you, and outside.
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Date: 10/15/2013 9:33:00 AM
A creative write, Cindy! I enjoyed both the poem and presentation...very inspiring. Congrats on your winning placement! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Cindy
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:16:00 AM
Written just as a poetess should write. Congratulations on your win.... Love ya ... Jake
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Date: 10/4/2013 5:39:00 PM
Well, I got it then!!! Of course there is a vase there too. I love how you made that shape.
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:41:00 PM
Cindy, I see love, John at the end of this one. What was this all about? I sure liked the representation of the rose you made at the top. and interestingly, the bottom part could be a small table!
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Cindy Lu
Date: 10/4/2013 2:18:00 AM
It's a rose, in a vase, on a table.. and on my part I was reading parables from the Bible atop the table. John commented me long ago, his part speaks for itself...
Date: 10/2/2013 10:41:00 PM
Don't confuse my patriotism with princes we haven't paid. We have princes we've paid yours and mine. In ancestors. God will make things right without casinos one day. Just wait.
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Cindy Lu
Date: 10/4/2013 2:21:00 AM
There is more than courage wuth my patriotism. There is always a bit of sadness that goes along with it with me.. you can call me a girl if you want ta but seriously, isn't there ??
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The Situation
Date: 10/2/2013 10:44:00 PM
Your sadly made me reach out to you.

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