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The Richard Enigma

I'm rather hard to figure out Not many really get what I'm about I'd rather sit quietly than shout I keep it real I'm not prone to pout You might think me passive Still I will act when others are subdued by doubt Somewhat serious Yet prone to smile Not ecstatic I have my own style If you need comfort I'll stay with you a while Don't expect much talking I'm a listener on the emoticom dial As a poet I know the power of the word In the end I like to hear and be heard Like you I too have been burned Within adversity there were things I learned I am a dancer Stepping out on pages Quiet paper oragami cages Traveling on thoughts Floating through all my stages Fast forward rewinding Pausing at my distance Like the Borg victims there is no resistance I breathe my thoughts with a certain persistence If you look at me I might reflect you Searching for answers Seeing beyond dark corridors To places bright blue Perhaps you as well Like me are an enigma too! Written April 8th.

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Heather Ober

Date: 9/16/2015 1:25:00 PM

I loved reading this one!! A glimpse into your creative mind. The Borg line brought a BIG smile to my face. I love Star Trek haha.

Heather Ober
Date: 9/17/2015 7:52:00 AM

TNG has always been my favourite too! Picard was the best :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:08:00 AM

I too am a fan, more so of Star Trek the next Generation. Captain Jean Luc Picard was my favorite Captain.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/27/2015 1:49:00 PM

The winsome title drew me in. Oh I could relate to this poem soo much that i was surprised at the coincidental similarities for sir Im so like that, introvert n resesved yet quick to smile. Wow liked the line of the origami, witty. Kudos for the rhyming n wording! Cheers.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:10:00 AM

Sorry for the late response. Thanks for visiting.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2015 10:48:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..A little to know about you..Congrats on your win..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:10:00 AM

A belated thanks Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 12:21:00 AM

You know the title alone is outstanding. I love it, makes me jealous. Why didn't I think about it? Love it. A smooth ending. Love it... Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:08:00 AM

A belated thanks Linda.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/23/2015 10:51:00 AM

A worthy write; don't know you well, but this fits what I have seen here at PS. Congratulations, Richard, on being yourself, honest and relaxed about it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks a Reason, sorry somehow I missed your visit.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/23/2015 7:49:00 AM

You and your write is amazing. I really like that i am a dancer stanza, you do know the power of words and you use them so very well. It is a pleasure to read you ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:12:00 AM

You are kind Casarah, sorry I missed responding to this great comment.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/22/2015 3:13:00 AM

The fourth stanza shows just how talented you are as a poet... you're a wonderful, unique and clever writer. I think it is wonderful that you are a listener. Wish more were that way! " If you look at me I might reflect you"...ooooh. Another nice line. Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:13:00 AM

I had to go back and read stanza four, I kinda like that one too. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/21/2015 2:49:00 AM

Nicely done, a nice win as well. Reminds me of my Contradictions. Have a fab day ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:14:00 AM

Hi Debbie, it seems I missed a bunch of comments on this piece. Sorry for the late response.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/19/2015 8:56:00 PM

Nice to learn a little more about you through your bio poem, Richard! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:15:00 AM

A belated thanks Sandra.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/19/2015 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Rick . A 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:15:00 AM

Thanks for the blessing Eve. Sorry for the late response.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2015 7:01:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:16:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats Jan, sorry for the late response.

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/18/2015 10:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win Richard. You fit my husband really well. A great bio! Thank you for entering my contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2015 2:56:00 AM

Thanks for choosing this one Tammy.

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 4/12/2015 3:26:00 PM

All of my personalities just loved this poem!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2015 1:16:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 4/11/2015 1:36:00 PM

PS I love the self-analysis ( if that be it ) of “ The Richard Enigma ”. as for me they have said that I am an anomaly but never an “ Enigma ”. I guess we all have some label that projects and what others reflect.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 3:06:00 PM

Thanks again William. I think in the end each of us has our own anomalies. That's what makes the study of humans so interesting.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/10/2015 11:46:00 PM

Can you please write my Bio? I will only ask one small favor, lie and exaggerate as much as is needed! As for the poem, I know I keep saying the same thing, but fantastic, just resonates so well!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 8:07:00 AM

Ha ha, you kill me Arthur!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2015 11:25:00 PM

gosh, richard, I hope YOUR bio will inspire me to do a better job with MINE. I ditched my lame attempt at a bio by the decades. I gotta find a hook like you did with yours. This is just excellent!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 8:21:00 AM

I have no doubt you will come up with something spectacular.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2015 5:40:00 PM

A wonderful enigma, you are, indeed. This was an exceptional read; I give it a "7"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 8:22:00 AM

What a nice comment, thanks M.L.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/10/2015 5:09:00 PM

I liked your BIO, Rick. It's focused on your character and perception of yourself. Given us relatively new poets a glimpse of the Enigma that is you. :) Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Kim you are kind, I'm pleased you like my poem.

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2015 10:59:00 AM

Richard, this bio of you is wonderful, a mix of qualities beautiful to me, there were so many awesome words and lines within this well penned poem, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/10/2015 1:14:00 AM

Thanks Constance, I appreciate your kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/9/2015 8:08:00 AM

Richard you are not an Enigma but simply a harmonized human being! Well done my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios, I do appreciate the many varied experiences and thoughts that God has gifted me with. The definition you have provided regarding Harmony will be further contemplated.

Mama Bear

Date: 4/8/2015 6:09:00 PM

Enigma, yes. I know you well my son and you always bring more surprises into my life. You are a fav all the way 'round Much love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2015 8:53:00 AM

Thats why you are my "Favorite" you understand me. I love you too!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2015 3:22:00 PM

A fantastic bio Richard...You do have a good grasp of who you are and what I see is a great man/husband/friend/poet....a fav

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2015 8:25:00 AM

It seems there is a certain bit of accuracy with the three letter code *lol*. Fortunate for me I am not a "Hazel" nut or a "Pee" nut! Hugs to you as well Jan.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2015 12:16:00 PM

I do hope this is bio contest Richard as it a brilliant description of the man we know and love here:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx (bit worrying the three letter code is NUT lol)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2015 8:55:00 AM

Yes it is for the contest, thanks Jan hugs to you as well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/8/2015 11:11:00 AM

'I am a dancer stepping out on pages,Quiet paper oragami pages,travelling on thoughts,floating through all my stages- WoWzer.I really love the shadow I see in this mirror..Ought to favour this exceptional bio.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2015 12:07:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/8/2015 10:53:00 AM

Yes, that's a fine description of my friend, Richard. Oh...you know him too? He's a sweetie pie. Give him my love and tell him...I'm an enigma too, though I'm loud and in your face....I lack the finer grace...my emotions all over the place...open book face...in love with romance and lace! :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2015 12:08:00 PM

I love your response! A big hug back to you Eileen.