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The Raven's Revenge

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The Raven's Revenge

There she stands 
With a gun in her hand
Black tresses 
Flowing down
Touching the back
Of a long multi-tiered
Billowing
Ruffled black gown
Surveying her kingdom
There in the mist
The beautiful Princess of death

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The ravens that borrow 
her well-known name
Fly in a blackening sky
Piercing the night
With their screams of fright
Circling  the tomb where he lies

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With one last look - she turns away
Remembering that fateful day
When she found him lying 
In the arms of another 
Sending her into  a rage

~~~~~

Hell has no fury 
like a women scorned
So all the prophets say
But that single tear
That falls from her eye
Knows she'll love him
Till the day---she dies

~~~~~


Written by:  Elaine George, Jan 17/11

For:               The contest - Among the Dead
Inspired by:  The Rambling poet and 
                     the picture that stirred my senses.

PLACED 6TH

Copyright © Elaine George

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:52:00 AM
    I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
    Many congratulations Elaine on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:56:00 PM
    This is a wonderful write from you Elaine.Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:59:00 AM
    Oh! I missed reading this beautiful write of yours. Wonderful theme with a fine emotional touch. Congratulations for your big win--and many thanks for your nice comments---rohini

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:25:00 AM
    Oh, I love your theme of a betrayed woman, Lainie. Marvelous interpretation of the photo. Each one I'm reading is so different. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 8:30:00 PM
    A touching emotional write. many congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:30:00 PM
    This picture surely stirred up soem great writing. Congratulations Elaine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:27:00 PM
    You did it Elaine! Congratulations to you on winning in Constance's contest.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:08:00 PM
    Wonderful job Elaine, and congratulations on your, awesome win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Elaine

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, "Laine". Expert at work here with perfect imagery. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:49:00 PM
    Congrats Lainie on your wonderful win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:19:00 PM
    YES, this is what I miss Laine. You are such a story teller and it is nice to see your name back on the soup. Phyl

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:16:00 PM
    Koolio capture on the picture for the contest Elaine. You wrote it as you viewed it. It'll be on the podium for sure....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 12:09:00 PM
    ~~Magnificent Lainie~~ Wishing you the best in the contest. I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Lainie. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:29:00 AM
    An excelent entry for the contest, Elaine. I enjoyed the read, great write. Caryl

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Indeed...it stirred quite a wonderful depiction of the somber scene!! Well done!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:52:00 AM
    I love it Elaine, i agree about the furry like a womens scorn~ we women are from the heart,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 6:56:00 AM
    Thanks for supporting my contest.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 6:41:00 AM
    Raven - an ominous name for a woman. Very dramatic write, dear Lainie. Glad to see you are favoring us with some of your fine work. Love, Dave

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