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The Raven's Revenge

There she stands With a gun in her hand Black tresses Flowing down Touching the back Of a long multi-tiered Billowing Ruffled black gown Surveying her kingdom There in the mist The beautiful Princess of death ~~~~~ The ravens that borrow her well-known name Fly in a blackening sky Piercing the night With their screams of fright Circling the tomb where he lies ~~~~~ With one last look - she turns away Remembering that fateful day When she found him lying In the arms of another Sending her into a rage ~~~~~ Hell has no fury like a women scorned So all the prophets say But that single tear That falls from her eye Knows she'll love him Till the day---she dies ~~~~~ Written by: Elaine George, Jan 17/11 For: The contest - Among the Dead Inspired by: The Rambling poet and the picture that stirred my senses. PLACED 6TH

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:52:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
Many congratulations Elaine on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:56:00 PM
This is a wonderful write from you Elaine.Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:25:00 AM
Oh, I love your theme of a betrayed woman, Lainie. Marvelous interpretation of the photo. Each one I'm reading is so different. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:30:00 PM
A touching emotional write. many congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:30:00 PM
This picture surely stirred up soem great writing. Congratulations Elaine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:27:00 PM
You did it Elaine! Congratulations to you on winning in Constance's contest.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:08:00 PM
Wonderful job Elaine, and congratulations on your, awesome win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, "Laine". Expert at work here with perfect imagery. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congrats Lainie on your wonderful win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:19:00 PM
YES, this is what I miss Laine. You are such a story teller and it is nice to see your name back on the soup. Phyl
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:56:00 PM
Such an enjoyable read. Good luck to you in the contest. Jack B
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:16:00 PM
Koolio capture on the picture for the contest Elaine. You wrote it as you viewed it. It'll be on the podium for sure....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:09:00 PM
~~Magnificent Lainie~~ Wishing you the best in the contest. I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Lainie. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:29:00 AM
An excelent entry for the contest, Elaine. I enjoyed the read, great write. Caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:46:00 AM
Indeed...it stirred quite a wonderful depiction of the somber scene!! Well done!
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:52:00 AM
I love it Elaine, i agree about the furry like a womens scorn~ we women are from the heart,..p.d.
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:56:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:41:00 AM
Raven - an ominous name for a woman. Very dramatic write, dear Lainie. Glad to see you are favoring us with some of your fine work. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:44:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner to me..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:02:00 AM
Very good write... excellent poetry...enjoyed your work...Michael
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