The Rain

The rain of the morn is lightly Falling, a soft gentle Sound, it rained the same all night long Those tunes sentimental The rhythm of the rain changed from Slow to faster_the dove No longer sings, the rain slows down Now sounds only dreamed of

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 10:32:00 PM

this one is very nice, Sara. Much enjoyed.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2013 2:30:00 AM

Love this Sara.How beautifully you have described the rain here.

The Situation

Date: 1/16/2013 7:30:00 PM

if it were a code i wonder what we'd hear?

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2013 2:03:00 PM

again such wonderful visual aspect to your poetry,,,Sara...

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/16/2013 12:07:00 PM

What a splendid poem on rain and birds !! I watched the brown wrens yesterday in the rain...made my toes and nose ache for them. They have found a haven on my porch and leave me little droppings lol I enjoyed this sweet verse !!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/16/2013 10:08:00 AM

A beautiful poem Sara. And yes the birds sing when it is so cold out. I wonder how their feet do not freeze for it is storming and they are still out. Singing at -24C and if they can sing why am I so glum. Brightens my day with their song. love phyl

Heather Ober

Date: 1/16/2013 7:43:00 AM

This is beautiful, Sara. Very well done!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2013 6:48:00 AM

What a lovely write you have produced Sara so nice xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/16/2013 6:44:00 AM

This is truly beautiful, I really loved reading this amazing and spectacular poem my friend! You have painted an elaborate scene of tender rain and the glowing from the sound of the rain! What a harmonious piece, a very glorious poem Sara, Great Work!!