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The Purple Heart

Radiant are the words that painted your existance Shinning are the details swept with lyrical rhymes Brightly sewn were intentions that bless us day and night A tapestry of beauty in heart shapes and designs A glowing presence expressing love made of it's own light Hopes that peddle effortlessly that never wains or tires Happy and content circleing it's beautiful fire Sparks sparkling words of care Rainbow colours here and there Stars that twinkle in the night small white unageable lights That lights above the perfect night Just before the perfect day I like the way you decorated my heart I really can't discribe this kind of art Colours are made to dazzle the eyes But what you've given also pleases the blind Rhyme and rythem do not account for the deaf But lives feel those certian depths I stand in awe of your beautiful delights Close my eyes and say good night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/18/2014 7:07:00 PM
Nicely written John. Now off to watch the voice on tv. Comments will have to wait for another day.. love phyl
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Date: 11/21/2013 10:00:00 PM
this is wonderful.. thanks for stopping by at my page, John.
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Date: 11/21/2013 1:11:00 PM
John, the intensity and flow of your poem strengthen its many messages and convey aching regard for your words. Especially pleasing the blind and rhythm and rhyme and the deaf. All so poetic, master of the art.
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:04:00 PM
is this the one? well, you certainly injected some colour into it...balm to my heart and soul (soup mail)
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:59:00 PM
You are trying to describe the feeling of adoration. Super job, John. Enjoyed :).
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:18:00 PM
Ps., Stopping Back By As Forgetting To Mention Unto Your Gifted Bard, A Beautiful Favourite ˜ Stay Cool!
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Date: 11/16/2013 8:59:00 PM
† I Like This Seeming Shotgun Verse In Possibilities Unto Multiple Lights Which May Touch Your Heart ? A Bit Of Abstract When Viewed From Such His Kaleidoscope Be Love, My Dear Old Friend, John ˜ Many Things Are Beyound Myself, Yet, I Too Am Just Waiting For These Eyes To Be Opened While Nursing This Bottle Called Time ˜ Cheers, We Shout And Let There Be Light * A Companion Unto Both, 'HIS' Love As Truth ˜ Very Beautiful Your Painting! Thank You For The Visit And Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:06:00 PM
Written with purities beauty, and no disguise on the way you feel towards this special person. bravo my friend and thanks for your comment on i am his. cheri
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:46:00 PM
This is splendid! Love it... Terry (and thans for all your kind comments)
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Date: 11/16/2013 12:54:00 AM
Actually Terry you inspired this piece but it went in a different direction. I planned an epic like yours but certain people were demanding romance.
Date: 11/12/2013 4:44:00 PM
This is so good John, look forward to the continuation...
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