The Proposal

On his knee proposed, The mother in her was moved, Future is assured! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 January 2016

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/14/2016 7:22:00 PM

Wonderful haiku. That's a touching event and that's cool how you explained it in 3 lines... simply great!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 7:25:00 PM

It becomes simpler when you repeat it, my new friend J.W. E.! Haha. Thank you for your visit and comment!

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/13/2016 2:57:00 PM

nicely written.....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 8:00:00 AM

Thank you my friend, LL!

White Sage

Date: 1/13/2016 10:25:00 AM

he proposed in such nice way...excellent write Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 8:01:00 AM

Yes, his way was perfect! Thank you, White Sage, for visiting and commenting!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/13/2016 10:10:00 AM

:) There are times when a woman loves to mother her man....It musn't always have a negative connotation. Sometimes it is a very beautiful thing to baby a man. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 8:07:00 AM

Yes, it is true, dear Eileen. Some women and some men like it and that is fine. My writing was focusing on woman's desire to become a mother was a decisive factor to accept the proposal. Thank you my dearest, for your lovely visit.

Miraj Raha

Date: 1/13/2016 9:49:00 AM

very nicely expressed,Sir.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 8:08:00 AM

So glad to see you after that long a time, my friend, Miraj! Thank you for your surprise visit!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/13/2016 7:32:00 AM

We all need a bit of mothering.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/13/2016 7:59:00 AM

Yes, Richard, some of us need a little and some a lot! Ha-ha. Thank you my friend!