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The Promised Land

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Again and again, I scrape through the sand encrusted macadam pavement, avoiding patches of sunken sorrows, embossed in tv jingles, uttered from the lips of politicians, grinning, toothless, at the wandering immigrants, eager to find no home. Against the soundtrack of minimum wage, scores of campesinos work double shifts, avoiding traffic tickets, the long dark hallway that leers at happiness, trembling in freedom. Only Sundays promise solace, playing soccer with friends, the air biting with the coming winter, warmed by bowls of steaming menudo. Once more, the crows, perched on highway lights, mock the empty alleyways, where crushed beer cans, and broken tequila bottles litter the sunrise, unwilling to quench my thirst, …..unwilling To quench my thirst © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 8:56:00 AM
The description of all the scenes in the poem seems to be so vivid and candid that makes me empathize with you.
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:28:00 PM
I think many think the same way. The political agenda is broken and needs repair. Lots of job losses, home losses and frustration all around. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/30/2010 4:31:00 PM
Great expressive and descriptive write..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara
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Date: 9/25/2010 8:37:00 AM
A power pack poem of frustration and emotion. This is how so many are feeling....that hopeless feeling we often have. A wonderful, expressive, thought provoking poem, James! Well done!
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Date: 9/25/2010 8:25:00 AM
During the last election, we voted based on promises of change. What happened to them? Our society continues in a downward spiral, Jimbo, and it's going to take more than promises "to quench my thirst" when I go to the polls in November. Powerful write, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/25/2010 8:22:00 AM
The politicians make so many promises, but rarely do they deliver. Just look at the state of our country as you described here. I'm trying to "tune out" all of the political ads right now. Each candidate attacks his or her opponent and no matter which one gets elected, I don't think we'll ever see "The Promised Land." Best to you, Diane
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:45:00 AM
enjoyed reading today...
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:22:00 AM
Great write Mr. Goff ! james
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:52:00 AM
Wow! Excellent write.
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