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Home » Poems » Demetrios Trifiatis » The Prisoner

The Prisoner

Come, my darling, Make me a prisoner of your blistering love So In the dungeon of your arms, my freedom To find! © Demetrios Trifiatis 23 SEPTEMBER 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/27/2014 4:56:00 AM
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I read this earlier, my dear poet, but I was unable to post a comment. I absolutely adore this one.....so beautiful and sweet.....in every way. To be a captive to love is deliciously sweet! Hugs
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/27/2014 5:05:00 AM
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Beautiful to see your smile again, dear Eileen! During your absence the sky was overcast over Poetrysoup!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/23/2014 3:52:00 PM
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I love the way that even through a dungeon you are able to express freedom.I love the way you managed to find love through blisters,pain and her chains.Different and beautiful!!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/24/2014 3:08:00 AM
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Dear Charmaine it is an oximoron but love is an oximoron and the antithesis created makes the main idea stronger! Thank you for your excellent analysis and comment.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 1:50:00 PM
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truly beautifully painted excellent piece
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/23/2014 2:14:00 PM
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Thank / you my good friend, Liam! You so kind!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/23/2014 11:44:00 AM
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geez, such passion in your splendid write... enjoyed thus, D... huggs
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/23/2014 1:31:00 PM
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Happy you have enjoyed it, dear nette! Thank you for your passionate comment!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 10:38:00 AM
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Wow that's romantic Demetrios n I really loved it!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/23/2014 1:33:00 PM
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If you find it romantic, dear Dr. Upma, then a romantic heart you possess! Thank you for you visit and romantic comment!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/23/2014 8:54:00 AM
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Excellent write. Thank you.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/23/2014 10:11:00 AM
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Thank you my friend, Maurice!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/23/2014 8:15:00 AM
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Very captivating write, Demetrios. You always amaze with the epigrams
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/23/2014 10:12:00 AM
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Dr. Ram, I so much appreciate your superlative comment! Thank you so much!

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