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The Potter's Wheel

Pulling with hands soft and smooth as glazed clay,
Her foot prods the pedal, turning the wheel.  
She basks in the bliss of a beautiful mess.
She's learned art is born from that carefree mess.
Moulding with hands caked in layers of clay, 
She makes artwork dance on that spinning wheel.
Her bones creak along with the aging wheel,
Silver hair spattered by flecks of sweet mess.
She glazes with hands rough and cracked as dried clay.
Beyond clay and wheel, life spins a fine mess.  

*Form: Tritina

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:29:00 AM
    I can see why this one was chosen, I enjoyed it even more reading it this time. Mood has such an impact when reading poetry. I am putting this one in my favorites.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Heather, congratulations on your Ist place win! I'm sorry I'm a little late. I've been crazy busy but glad I got to read the other entries! Great work as usual. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Congratulations Heather...beautiful form...I knew nothing about but you made it look so easy...Donna

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 7:39:00 AM
    congrats on ur win!! good 1

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Just looking here to see how many congrats you got off this one. Awesome, and I hope they all truly READ it!!! It was so deserving of the first place win, sweetie, and thanks for realizing the hard work I put into that light hearted poem of mine.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Great! FAVing it. Congrats on 1st place. Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Wow, congrats...are you a potter by any chance? Enjoyed. BG

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Heather, you are seriously tearing up the winner's page!! Awesome win!

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Simplicity of brilliance, Thank You

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Great write, congratulations ....Seren

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:11:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your grand win my dear friend, Heather! A great Tritina indeed! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Hello Heather, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Congratulations Heather! Life beyond the clay wheel sure does spin a fine mess:-)

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:08:00 PM
    I knew this would be the first place winner. Heather, I hope you realize how freakishly talented you are!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Beyond the superb comparison of the wheel and life, the use of alliteration was nice, especially in the first verse. Congratulations, RAY

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Heather awesome creativity, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Well...You wheeled in the trophy!! Great job.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 10:08:00 AM
    This is such a wonder it came out on top!! Congratulations, Heather!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:17:00 AM
    Congrats for your big win Heather. Nicely illustrated with words. Warm Smiles, Connie