The Playground

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THE PLAYGROUND

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

An immoral heart evil's playground easily becomes! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 25 September 2016

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Date: 9/28/2016 4:23:00 AM

Sadly this is so often true Demetrios:-( hugs jan xx

Date: 9/26/2016 11:03:00 PM

It is easy for many to be ensnared in that trap.

Date: 9/25/2016 7:57:00 AM

Very apt Sir.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/25/2016 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Miraj! I appreciate it!

Date: 9/25/2016 6:09:00 AM

Yes the whole world Demetrios your monoku speaks volumes.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/25/2016 11:24:00 AM

Unfortunately you are so right my friend, Harry! Thank you!

Date: 9/25/2016 5:25:00 AM

- So true, great written my friend :) - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/25/2016 11:24:00 AM

You so kind my dear friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much!