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the picture developed

In society we seek security
We make purity a priority
We prefer clarity as oppose to transparency
And want our dignity to be seen as piety
All while prefering luxury to charity
And loyalty to our royalty
While our own faithfulness
A probability instead of responsibility
Weak with an inability to suppress
Impresionability yes we go willingly
Useing ingenuity for promiscuity
Shatering the ballance of fidelity
Destroy the institution of reliability
Shame the good name of liberty
Carry impurity into infinity
Selfishly seeking impunity and immunity
While chipping at the unity of community
Destroying the integrity of the family
All in the context of one congruity
Can one infideliy beget so much cruelty

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  1. Date: 8/10/2015 11:03:00 PM
    Awesome write :)

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 8/12/2015 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Deb It's been a while but I was just checking and I see you were here recently . I'll be paying you a visit.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Great poem with lots of insight! Thanks for commenting on my poem. God bless, Maureen

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 2/12/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You've been saving this.
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 3:12:00 AM
    a profound statement, as it is today, good poem...

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:08:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:56:00 PM
    Good one, and gosh, this could also be almost classified as mono-rhyme, couldn't it?

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Some very good and accurate lines that have been penned..I like the line "Destroying the integrity of the family"..Satan has just about won that one which totally destroys a society...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:55:00 AM
    I like the me it fits so well. Each line not only says something, it forms a picture in the mind. Great use of words and stays on Enjoyed !! Thank you for dropping by my page.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:33:00 PM
    now this one I really like! stellar use of both end and internal rhyme, and I happen to agree with every line...the title is an interesting one, why 'the picture developed'?

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Have you had a picture develop recently?
    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/24/2012 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Simple. The title was writen first. I had a compleatly different ideal for the poem but it was too painfull to write. But not the principle. Writing about the principle was easy. Comming up with words not so easy.
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Wonderful reading your outstanding poetry today TS. Love, Carol