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The Piano

tuneless piano silently singing the truth of silence. broken keys fallen in the rounding path of stiff ticking clock. sun of love once perched fingering the hearts joined the joke of life.

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Date: 6/25/2020 1:42:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/26/2020 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Funom for your delightful words..
Date: 6/21/2020 2:08:00 PM
The sun of love once perched... and in the keys' degradation, the sad 'joke of life' is seen... Yet perhaps there is beauty in those broken-down keys too. Food for thought... Thanks, Jenish
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for your kind support..
Date: 6/21/2020 8:38:00 AM
I love this nostalgic beautiful poem... Thank you, Jenish...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you Shirley for your kind support..
Date: 6/21/2020 7:52:00 AM
I hear the silence of the piano--great write, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you Vijay for your kind support..
Date: 6/21/2020 7:31:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I love it. God bless you with love, Gina
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you Regina for your delightful words..
Date: 6/21/2020 7:01:00 AM
Captivating poem dearest, Jenish. Somehow sad but so beautiful writing dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 11:34:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your support..
Date: 6/21/2020 2:32:00 AM
music- there is heart of peaceful living .....
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab..
Date: 6/21/2020 2:09:00 AM
The weight of a lifetime.. a mighty silence preceded by symphonies of Life and Love! What a great interpretation of your deep thoughts! Unique and stunning! A great pleasure to read, Jenish! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Besma for that delightful comment..
Date: 6/21/2020 1:14:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Jenish, be safe. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/21/2020 1:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve.. Have a great day!!

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