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Weed Park as I recall it from the 60's:

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Like my fondest memory of it, the park of my childhood still remains - with its garden of roses near the entrance and its verdant rolling hills. On its eastern street, It had a tiny zoo our step dad took us to. Gone now are the monkeys, the snake house, the zebras, the giraffes, and the elephants with wrinkly greedy trunks reaching out for the leaves I waved excitedly in my sweaty palms. Across the street, the swings, see saws, slides and springers beckoned us. Dizzy with excitement, on the merry-go-rounds we spun. Then from one thing to another, laughing, we’d all run. When did the train and the miniature roller coaster disappear? Even that fun pool in the park’s center with its outdoor snack shack was removed - to be replaced in a new spot by a new pool, bigger and now with water slides. Are the picnic tables where we gathered for wonderful reunions even in the same green spots where they used to be? I try to see Weed Park whenever I revisit my home town, first crossing the quaint bridge above the pond where we could ice skate in winter. Leaving it, I cross the street to where my fondest memory of the park remains. There I see myself sitting on a swing, legs pumping air, as higher and higher I fly. My father, the other one, whom I rarely see, has come to visit me and my sisters, and I’m shouting gleefully, “Look at me, Dad! Look at me!” Written Feb. 2016 for the contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 2/22/2016 6:10:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... lovely nostalgic verse Andrea that you painted with words - thanks - Lindsay
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:40:00 AM
MY God, there are tears in my eyes. What a wonderful park. You are an artist with the camera - all those ducks on the lake, and the last one of the man and the swan. This is the world nostalgia winner, Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:47:00 PM
heavens, Daver. those are not my photos. I got them off google!! I find so many images from that place!! Just typed in WEed Park from the 1960's images. These are a small part of what came up!!
Date: 2/21/2016 10:00:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Andrea.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:33:00 PM
Andrea,, Congratulations on your awesome win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:11:00 PM
I loved your free verse take on this, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:23:00 AM
sounds like such a lovely place, my park, growing up, still remains but it never had more than a stream, a few benches and a dock...i just love the memories it offers and the solitude....loved this one :)
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Date: 2/19/2016 7:41:00 PM
Best memories ever. I miss those days sis.
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Date: 2/19/2016 5:13:00 PM
This is not just an ordinary park, Andrea; it holds very sweet and dear memories; what a pity that time plays havoc with lovely places like these...good thing you have a good memory, and postcards! // paul
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Date: 2/19/2016 3:04:00 PM
Very nice Andrea.
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Date: 2/19/2016 2:33:00 PM
Great memories are so well expressed in your pleasant park poem, Andrea. Enjoyed!
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:59:00 AM
Your words find the heart and mind, as they roll gently off the tongue, slipping quietly into memory. Well done! Emile. #7
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Date: 2/19/2016 7:34:00 AM
That is not a park but paradise itself dear, Andrea" Beautiful: pictures, writing and memories. Excellent!
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Date: 2/19/2016 2:08:00 AM
Such beautiful memories you paint here, Andrea. Sure to be on the winner's list. Elaine
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Date: 2/19/2016 1:35:00 AM
Memories to be cherished forever Andrea.. I can relate to this.. best wishes!
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:09:00 AM
Lovely poem reads like a winner
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:25:00 PM
Made me long for my own things gone past, very beautiful Andrea, thank you!
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:57:00 PM
Just delightful, Andrea. You really do have the soul of a child within you ... and it makes it's way into your pen, so that we can all view, read, and enjoy. It's too bad those places we come to love change through out the years, however!
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Date: 2/18/2016 6:59:00 PM
Sweet nostalgia in this one. I liked that you used old postcards for this one since I have bee writing for Postcard collecting magazines for years - and I make some money at it. Now I will look at your other new one. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/18/2016 6:55:00 PM
such fond memories you paint. good luck in contest
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