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The Owner of Time

Once upon a time, There was a guy So wealthy who was named Rich. And one day, He brought home The creature “Time” himself. As the owner of the time, He was known to all. Constantly whispered and moaned about, As the owner of time. Though Time was old, He was fearless and bold. High and mighty, Proud and cold. So once he got tired, From the wealthy man’s hold, He broke free, And ran away. As Rich and his wealth Became lonely again, And so this time, He brought home, Some untamed, Unnamed Creature labeled: Space. 2015/6/29

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Date: 6/10/2016 8:05:00 AM
Nin hao? Congrats YunZhi, for having your awesome poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:30:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured. Awesome write. love phyl
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:10:00 AM
YunZhi Wu, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:15:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome. I've written poetry for about two years now, and would love to see what everyone else's poetries are like to improve upon y own.
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:15:00 AM
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Date: 3/24/2016 1:38:00 PM
YunZhi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:24:00 AM
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:23:00 AM
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:16:00 AM
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:15:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome. I've written poetry for about two years now, and would love to see what everyone else's poetries are like to improve upon y own.

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