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The Opening

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The Opening

--The opening of a new life--

Airborne smiles under a pessimistic cloud
Peaceful living memories, wiping every frown 
Vibrant beams throughout the night 
The outflow shadows cloud nine;

Scoot away from the pain,
Enjoy all eyes towards the gateway
An endless fate awaits 

Maybe not today
Perhaps not tomorrow
Be Free * Live Happy
And just Believe--
--The Beginning of everything--

By; PD


A Sweet Merry Christmas   From: PD

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  1. Date: 12/20/2014 11:12:00 AM
    ok...I like this!

  1. Date: 7/10/2014 9:33:00 PM
    PD A poem with a lot of wisdom and truth. A lesson that we all should try to live by. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Friends Don't Give Up poem.

  1. Date: 6/21/2014 12:53:00 AM
    You will be the first to know when it happens. 2/3 is complete the rest is still a mystery...just like you :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2014 5:14:00 PM
    HI Linda, your advice to move on in life is sound reasoning; unfortunately many find it hard to cope with their misfortunes or to escape from their past. // paul

  1. Date: 4/2/2014 1:02:00 AM
    PD. thanks for all your recent comments and congrats. I can hardly keep up with your contests, girl!!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 5:40:00 AM
    "an endless fate awaits"....... nice lines... -- akash

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:06:00 PM
    Just a wonderious truthful write people say that life is coming to an end but i believe it is just beginning, maybe it's the native american in me. cheri

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 5:29:00 PM
    A nice poem thanks hope you are free and happy And thanks for your kind comment on my poem Colin

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 5:04:00 PM
    I can dig it. Just believe sister and everything will be alright. Good to see you in 2014. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:34:00 AM
    NICE!!!! :)

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 12:03:00 AM
    Enjoying this one again, PD. it was such a happy one.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 12:50:00 PM
    So inspirational, and so beautifully worded. I feel better already!!! Thanks Lisa. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 1:34:00 PM
    A wonderful poem about hope, well done. If more people had this mind set there would more happiness in the world.

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 1:18:00 AM
    Good afternoon my dearest sis! I'm coming back to read and enjoy once again this extremely lovely poem of yours. Missing to reread your masterpieces! TYSM for your precious gems & everything! By the way, belated TYSM for the Christmas Carol song & all Christmas wishes! I still want to sing w/ u. Wishing u all the best of Health & Happiness esp. this coming New Year . Advance Happy Three Kings as well. Goodnyt there now. I'll take my short rest hoping my flu remnants will vanish. Lovem4everLeo

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Extreme beauty hidden in opening, a great philosophical poem, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Thanks for your wishes always nice to read your poetry and your comments. Wishing you and your family the very best for 2014. I hope this new year will be full of inspiration. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 10:44:00 AM
    to read your poetry is to believe,,in poetry in you...

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 7:35:00 PM
    such an inspirational poem...enjoyed reading this little treasure of yours tonight....hope you had a great Christmas :) hugs

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Yes i sang along with you on my Christmas carol loved it by the way, nice write above as always my friend thanks for all the laughter and care you've showed me throughout the year. and for becoming a great friend and confidont. sorry if my sp is not so hot. cheri

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 3:31:00 PM
    Beautiful message penned.Happy New year pd.

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