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His eyes were like stars shining in the moonlight His face was a glow as he stood there in the night My heart was a pounding as he touched my hand I felt my toes crinkle in the sand We began to talk and reminisce of the old We soon began to realize it was getting cold So he put his arms around me to keep me warm And at that very minute my heart was transformed.. As we looked deep in each others eyes I was so happy I began to cry He wiped the tear from my face And at that very moment my heart began to race This was something I never felt before I couldn't believe how it made me desire more As the sun began to go down and it became dark I could definitely feel that this was more than a spark As we lay there on the beach in the night He looked at me with such delight It felt so great lying there in his strong arms Not feeling fear safe from all harm As he gently placed his hand on my cheek All of a sudden I became very meek He slowly leaned in to kiss me and I was sublime I knew there was something different this time He spoke gently and said I have loved you for a long time But I never thought that you could be mine Now that you are here it feels like a dream Something out of a picture book or a scene You are so fine and ravishing such a beauty I see For many years my heart has been drawn to thee Touch me my love and let me know this isn't surreal For my heart is spinning like a record on a reel As he took my hand and we walked along the shore I knew he would be a man I would always adore My mind was thinking of how wonderful this felt Being with someone that made my heart melt At last I knew this was the one for me And when we kissed I knew we both agreed Now were living happily ever after In a life filled with love and laughter

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Date: 12/26/2015 12:40:00 AM
Hi Rose very nice poem, I think it got entered by mistake in my contest, please remove it as it does not meet the criteria for the contest and others cannot enter. My contest is an acrostic only for the word paradise, if you would like to submit another one. Thanks John
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Rose Stephens
Date: 12/26/2015 8:33:00 AM
Sorry I removed it thnxs..
Date: 12/25/2015 1:31:00 PM
well done Rose, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Rose Stephens
Date: 12/25/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thnk you Linda glad to meet you..Merry Christmas!!
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Rose Stephens
Date: 12/25/2015 6:52:00 PM
Date: 12/25/2015 11:59:00 AM
A very romantic and well written poem Rose. Welcome to Poetry Soup and Merry Christmas.
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Rose Stephens
Date: 12/25/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thnk you Nayda..
Date: 12/25/2015 11:29:00 AM
Rose, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Rose Stephens
Date: 12/25/2015 6:50:00 PM
Aww thnxs so much.. I appreciate your kind words..

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