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The Old One

I was passing by a college that was building brand new dorms Improving the quality of life above the current norms I stood a while and watched, the construction nearly done A magnificent sight but I kind of liked the old one The old dorm stood behind it with plaster on its walls And she held a special feeling for the kids who walked her halls I asked if I could take a walk through, why, I didn’t know I could swear I heard the voices of the students long ago They had walked these halls sharing their laughter and their tears And lives were touched within these walls through the passing years Maybe I was foolish, but before I stepped outside I sat on one of those old beds dropped my head and cried When I sent my kids to college, I said work hard and have some fun And if you get to choose your dorm, then choose the old one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/12/2008 8:22:00 AM
Awesome Vince, takes me back to my varsity days. I too stayed in one of the older residences and I swear we had more team spirit than the new dorms. very well written. Regards Heidie
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Date: 11/6/2008 6:44:00 AM
very poignant, makes me nostalgic for the good old college days. great read.
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Date: 11/4/2008 5:20:00 PM
i like your poem, a observation of improving society.
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:10:00 PM
Hey how are you on this fine but long day?
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Date: 11/1/2008 8:05:00 PM
Thank You for commenting on my poem GoodBye!. And you're right about all of it, But this is the only place I can share how I feel about things that are goin on in my life at that certain time. . .
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Date: 11/1/2008 6:33:00 PM
VERY GOOD POEM!!! Hey Vince I was wondering if you could read my new poem GoodBye! and tell me your thoughts. . .
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Date: 11/1/2008 6:51:00 AM
Hey how did I miss this? So sorry. It seems to be everything was built so much better way back when. Aside from the fact things are built as cheap as possible now, the older styles were simply more pleasing to the eye. I know this poem holds personal memory to treasure forever. It is so hard to say goodbye and let go sometimes. Very emotional and well expressed as always. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/31/2008 10:17:00 PM
Vince this is so heartfelt. I get emotional with things and places and certain fragrances that take you to a memory. Touching Vince. God bless you Michael
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Date: 10/31/2008 7:15:00 PM
Hey there my friend, you know something, I would have said the exact same thing, and that is the God's honest truth. Nothing like the old to make it all fall into place. I am an antique/ancient lover though...excellent. love K
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Date: 10/31/2008 4:15:00 PM
I loved this. It's sometimes difficult to let go of the symbols of the past especially when the memories are positive. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 10/31/2008 3:21:00 PM
such a great and awesome tribute to college days, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/31/2008 10:59:00 AM
Vince this poem is amazing - No need to apologize on the blog comment - I did a two year SHU term for stabbing a molester two days before my parole date - Wife was really upset over that one but I figured his 90 day opp wasn't near enough - Gave me 8 years for cooking dope and him 90 days for molesting a kid - In retrospect perhaps it was my dope that led him down that road - If so it was my responsibly to take him off of it - So 36 hours from the gate I took my shot - God bless you Vince
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Date: 10/29/2008 1:01:00 PM
This is TOO awesome, Vince!! Wonderful write and although I never went to college, I love my high school with the bricks and ivy that they have yet to replace ... thank goodness. THANK YOU so much for your comment on my blog. I was feeling a little down this a.m. but when I read the first thing you said about G.Bush moving in by Biden, I just roared ... made my day!! I am very glad you are here at the Soup my friend.
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:53:00 PM
so true... why does the old.. anything.. have to be changed... its a wonderful poem.. I really enjoyed reading it.. constance
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to an old memory. Great rhyme flow. Thanks for sharing. Milt
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Date: 10/28/2008 3:04:00 PM
Right on, Vince! The ivy-grown old brown stones, the Ichabod Cranish structures are what made my college special to me. Fortunately, two of them were still standing the last time I was there. As per usual, I enjoyed your poem big time. Love, daver
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Date: 10/28/2008 3:02:00 PM
Very wonderful poem, Vince. It really touched my heart when I read it.You've expressed it all so very well, indeed. Warm rgds and God bless you! Dorian
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:52:00 AM
I am moved by your poem The Old One - a great poem, indeed. Old memories do haunt us. It seems that inspite of new technology and advancements old is still gold. In Portugal it is unlawful to demolish old buildings or change its traditional facade. Thanks for appreciating my poem The Defaulter featured this week. Mohammad
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Date: 10/25/2008 4:46:00 AM
A great write...Conveys a special old connection...Schools and universities are looking real fancy nowadays...plundering the warmth from the halls and classes...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah
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Date: 10/23/2008 7:17:00 PM
Lots of memories cast in these old dorms. Excellent Vince. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/23/2008 12:42:00 PM
My husband and I recently had the opportunity to re-visit the campus of Cal Poly, San Luis Obispo Ca., where we first started our married life, more than 40 years ago. We were struggling with money, putting ourselves through, studying hard,but had such fun memories.It was so strange, all these year later, to see the young faces,as we strolled the campus, only this time as two older folks. It seemed as if we should be still one of them, carrying our books to class.Seemed like yesterday! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/23/2008 12:19:00 PM
Vince, I truly loved reading this. Oh if those old walls could talk. Wonderful writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2008 7:59:00 AM
I love this Vince. I can see this being read by an adult who is remembering her old man and how special he was. This is very, very wonderful.
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