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The Obscure Little Poetess

The obscure little poetess Leans forward in front of her screen Her fingers fly over the keys As she writes up her little dreams Each tiny key that she presses With her butterfly touches light Brings to life her deepest feelings On her computer screen so bright She pauses for just a moment And gazes at her pink flowers She wonders if her words will bring Those needed refreshing showers She looks inside her little heart And searches with all of her might Trying to find the hidden words That will make her lines come out right She’s lost in her own perfect world Filled with such beauty and delight A change from her hideous world That is filled with demons of night Sometimes on these same little keys A lonely tear or two will fall But she quickly wipes them away As she hears her fantasies call In this place filled with desire She can be a princess or queen With someone who just adores her Who makes love to her every dream She creates the most perfect place Where love never dies or betrays Where all is just goodness and light For the sun never sets for days She hides in this make believe land From the cruel truths of her life It’s where serenity abides For there’s no horror, no, nor strife In her sweet little reverie In her enchanted world of rhyme She’s once more who she used to be A woman blooming in her prime. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 7:10:00 AM
Delightfully uplifting the heart to the sphere of perfection! Beautifully done! Thank you!
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Date: 5/9/2013 4:57:00 AM
Great work that expresses what so many men and women feel in one way or another..Poetry can be an outlet for our good days and more so for our bad..Enjoyed reading this very well thoughtout work..You have maintained great form, rhythm, rhyme and flow..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:06:00 PM
Dear Eileen, I can understand Your Poetry, but I do have a hard time of telling truth from imagination. The last two lines in stanza 5 A change from her hideous world that is filled with demons of night How could you possibly live in a hideous world. I find Your Poetry very intense. I mean this in a good way,You and Harry have a lot in common in Your Writings Respectfully Flipper
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:59:00 AM
Every poem has a grain of truth, but the author also does embellish for effect at times. As for me...the demons I struggle with are depression and low self-esteem. :( I'm my worst enemy, Flipper. Sometimes I find it hard to go on, but I know my family needs me and so I persevere. I also know that God isn't finished with me yet so...Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you like the intensity.
Date: 5/8/2013 4:24:00 PM
Wondefully written... Inspiring and encourging!! We all need acknowledgement at a time... but years ago, I have abandoned this quest... and started writing for only myself! ..... But as for you, Queen Eileen, you are already upon your Throne.. :D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:57:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW! Guru Jad...that's amazing! Thank you. Well, I also write for the enjoyment, but I do need the support and encouragement. I thrive on it, so thanks for being generous with your words of praise. It means a great deal to me! :)
Date: 5/8/2013 1:01:00 PM
Obscure to the masses, maybe...but not to those who know and love her. And yes, Eileen...I would like my cake to be camo..;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2013 1:55:00 AM
BTW, Caleb...that's an awfully nice thing to say! ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 1:02:00 PM
Whatever makes you happy, Caleb! :)
Date: 5/8/2013 12:23:00 PM
You see to know a thing or two about eye-catching titles as well! Though obscure I don't think you are ;) I wonder if you are referring to a younger you or perhaps your daughter...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 1:03:00 PM
:) No...this is me...I was afraid I'd overused the word little...what who am I in comparison with the world of poets who have come and gone before and who are yet to be. Yes...I'm a little obscure poetess...but I'm happy! :) Thanks, Timothy...you are a dear friend.
Date: 5/8/2013 11:48:00 AM
WOW! Eileen; I really love this. She hides in this make believe land. The last stanza is beautiful. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:07:00 PM
Adorable...what a sweet adjective, Drake! Love it! Thanks...that quote is a very good one and pertinent to this write. Thanks for the visit. You're always welcome!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:06:00 PM
Glad you like it, Lucilla. Hope all is well, my dear.
Date: 5/8/2013 8:57:00 AM
This was a very adorable piece. Loads of charm & simplicity. A good quote from one of my favorite comedians, Steve Harvey: "You may not yet be where you want to be. But, be glad you are not where you used to be." Cheers to this piece!
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:27:00 AM
You are blooming into a beautiful desert flower, a very attractive write and writer. oooooo I got first view on this, am so honoured. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/8/2013 7:15:00 PM
it is now
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:04:00 PM
Richard...I'm thrilled to read this. I read it over and found only a tiny smidgen of tongue in cheek humor here! WOW! ;) I'm glowing! Thanks for the lovely compliment. I will cherish it...THE DF! (Desert Flower) Oh...is this a new term of endearment?
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:28:00 AM
but took to long writing the comment lol
Date: 5/8/2013 8:24:00 AM
Breathtaking! Where would we be without our magic pens? The places we can travel beyond the confines of reality. Thanks for taking us along with you.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 12:02:00 PM
Yes, it is good to have somewhere to travel to when things just get out of hand. Thanks for the post, Richard. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride.

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