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the note your holding

dear friend,
   i am someone you know. 
as a matter of fact someone real close. 
and i'm sending this note to let you know
that as a christian i have this hope.
  i see you around and i think your cool.
not like other guys that act like fools.
i see that in your heart that there is
something good, a smile and hands that would.
and i wonder is there Christ in your life. if
there is not; then i would like to invite. YOU!!!
it would be my delight. to give someone i like 
the gift of eternal life.
                                 your friend

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:19:00 PM
    A nice inspirational write inviting someone to join you in CHRIST. Nice one John. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 5:05:00 AM
    What a loving and inspirational note! x

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Hi John..Which female poet are you writing this to?..If it's Andrea, she'll be delighted! It blesses me to read a note of someone who sincerely wants to be evenly yoked..just think of all the problems that are potentially created when 2 of differing faiths become as one...complete and utter chaos. Great theme in this contest write, John. :) Gwendolen

    Date: 4/13/2012 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The note is to YOU!!!
  1. Date: 4/6/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Hi JOhn, keep this up and your book will be a reality before you know it. Love the message my friend! :)

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:48:00 PM
    VERY well done, john, for that love note contest. So WHO is the lady? (don't ya have to say?)

    Date: 4/6/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 2:18:00 PM
    My dear friend Johgn, this is uplifting! Very well done, great message! Ruben.