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The Mother of All Planets

< the universe has physical matter concentric sphers with many planets stars and galaxies for o b s e r v a t i o n text ual v i e w to see big bang but t o me o u r mother e a r t h c o u n t s the m o s t f o r i t ' s w h a t m a n y d o c a l l h e o m Though this is a shape poem it is written in diminished hexaverse lol

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Date: 9/19/2010 8:22:00 PM
Thanks for "commenting" on my "poetry" and can I say "wow" this creation is just absolutely "fantastic" it is a masterwork and I am just speechless at your "creativity" ~~
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:01:00 PM
I am a astronomy nut so loved this one. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/13/2010 11:18:00 PM
Wow, what a form/shape, this is Katherine. wonderful stuff. Harry
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:18:00 PM
nice one, great presentation
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