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The Moonlit Tide

My love departs whence the waves tumble to and fro o’er timeless grains of sand. Mottled depths of sea drown out restless rumble as fallen tears slip through my trembling hands. Say my name, enchanting moon of lore. I shall not fault you lest my love return. Beckon tides to well and light restore. Grant me this before my heart doth spurn. Full moon cast reflections bittersweet ‘til sunrise blanches all my thoughts of yore. If I fall prey to waking dawn’s deceit, Please rise anew to carry love ashore. Waiting heart shan’t drown in moonlit tide. In raging surge, for love I shall abide. For POETESS DARKLY's Blame it on the Moon Contest 10/23/13

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Date: 11/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
nice win.....SKAT
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:31:00 PM
Lovely winner you entered in this contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Loved it. I felt like I was reading the words of a poetry master from the past. This poem has an ageless feel.
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:30:00 PM
Oh wow......this is a beauty! It is like a classical piece of poetry.....I loved it! Congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:12:00 PM
Great winning work.Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:52:00 PM
this is one of my personal favorites in the contest...beautifully penned Rhonda, I love this one :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:29:00 AM
Hi Rhonda it is so lovely to see you back and winning again xx
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:18:00 AM
This is EXCELLENT!
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Date: 10/27/2013 4:02:00 PM
Very nicely written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 10/24/2013 9:05:00 AM
beautiful sonnet Rhonda....best wishes
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:22:00 PM
Nice write on Blame it on the mood, good luck,
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:53:00 PM
good luck in the contest. ..love skat
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Date: 10/23/2013 4:55:00 PM
a fine writing Rhonda, enjoyed reading! best of luck for the contest.
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Date: 10/23/2013 4:40:00 PM
You have enchanted me and by the use of the moon no less! I'm glad Poetess Darkly had this contest so you would write this incredible poem my friend! You have a special talent and I'm glad that you share it with all of us! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/23/2013 3:20:00 PM
Wow. Absolutely beautiful piece of poetry; loved every single line. Excellent job; kudos! :)
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