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The Mirror

I once took a walk When not so long ago In a history not far It showed itself to me It bowed To my amusement it did It spoke of an invitation I simply couldn't refuse "Come and take a look, Wonder your thirst... I see what you see, Do not be alarmed, do not be lost" I have come across a mirror Not entirely your typical vision Though it comes with a secret The message isn't really hidden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 10:20:00 AM
Mysterious and inviting. Bravo Poet! ––))
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Date: 3/26/2016 8:53:00 PM
Deep poem Sarah
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 4/13/2016 7:06:00 AM
:)
Date: 2/28/2016 5:32:00 PM
Much to ponder here, Sarah. Elaine
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/13/2016 12:20:00 AM
:) thank you for dropping by Elaine
Date: 2/25/2016 9:05:00 PM
This is an intriguing way to have an epiphany ... a burst of self-confidence from you yourself. Cool poem, Sarah. I enjoyed it's subtle wisdom.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/13/2016 12:19:00 AM
glad you see it that way Tim :) thanks
Date: 2/25/2016 6:19:00 AM
Hello Sarah...I like the mystery in this write...nicely penned
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/13/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thanks Joseph :)
Date: 2/25/2016 5:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great posts..Sara
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/13/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Sara :)
Date: 2/22/2016 7:37:00 AM
Witty and intriguing dear Sarah! Loved it!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/22/2016 10:08:00 PM
oh thank you dear friend :)
Date: 2/22/2016 4:45:00 AM
- Great written, Sarah ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/22/2016 10:08:00 PM
thank you Anne-Lise - hugs to you too :)

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