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The Magic of Moon

She seduced my soul when I saw her dressed in her ethereal evening gown As I was sitting under the stars gazing at her without making a single sound It was that mesmerizing nightfall when my lone heart was filled with delight As I watched her celestial figure sliding across the heavens sharing her light Since then a happy prisoner of her incomparable beauty I incessantly remain Forever praying the moment to come for to find myself in her magic domain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 MARCH 2014 *NOT FOR CONTEST

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Saba Khan

Date: 4/10/2014 1:19:00 AM

I didn't find your poem ''Come on my brother'' :(

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2014 1:27:00 AM

I though I have written '' COME MY BROTHER" sorry for the trouble! Thank you dear Saba!

Saba Khan

Date: 4/10/2014 1:18:00 AM

Aww...cute

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2014 1:25:00 AM

Thank you Saba!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/3/2014 10:25:00 AM

Enchantingly beautiful!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/3/2014 11:05:00 AM

Merci mon amie Charmaine! You very romantic! Thank you!

Vicki Acquah

Date: 3/29/2014 10:48:00 AM

There it is again the magic of your brevity.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 3:10:00 PM

Brevity is a way of philosophizing! Thank you for your visit and your cordial comment!

Vicki Acquah

Date: 3/29/2014 10:48:00 AM

There it is again the magic of your brevity.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 3/29/2014 9:17:00 AM

Oh, I like this. You are a majesty with words, Demetrios. May you forever stay within her enthralled beauty. and be captivated. Love ya.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:56:00 AM

How couldn't I stay within her divine beauty when she my subconscious world governs so affectively? Thank you so much for visiting and making such a gracious comment dear Toquyen!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/28/2014 11:56:00 PM

YES! The moon is my muse so you can imagine how excited I am to see you write such a respectful and romantic poem about this entity! I often go outside, even in the cold, and look up at the moon when it is pitch black outside, and it is always so very beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a tremendous poem my friend! Great Work! I didn't have internet this week, that is why I haven't been online! But it is all done now, I should be alright now!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:45:00 AM

See also my answer to Andrea and to Tiaua! I am happy you enjoy the moon as much as I do, probably that is the reason we are romantic!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:43:00 AM

There you are my friend! It is nice you have solved the problem of communication and you with us again! Thank you for visiting for your warm and kind messages were missed!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2014 8:27:00 PM

Romanticizing the moon. If there really is a Goddess of the moon, she must really love all the many beautiful poems we write to honor her!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:41:00 AM

Dearest Andrea, the Goddess moon or Luna or Selene, is Goddess A Artemis ( Diana), daughter of Zeus by Leto (Latona); twin sister of Apollo. Apollo was the Sun God and his sister the Moon Goddess. Apollo represents the conscious Man and his sister Artemis the subconscious! Apollo's temples were built where the sun good see them while his sister's inside the forests! Women as you know follow the Moon! Since I admire women I follow the moon! Ha-ha!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2014 1:39:00 PM

Simply beautiful Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:57:00 AM

Your visit fills me with joy dear Richard! Thank you!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/28/2014 12:05:00 PM

dreamy , very nice xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/29/2014 9:57:00 AM

So sweet of you my dear Mandy! Happy to receive your visit! Thank you!

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 3/28/2014 6:22:00 AM

Beware of the Moon's magic dearest Demetrios! a beautiful portrayal of romance and a awesome write, it just made my day. Lots of alofas, Tiaua.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2014 8:46:00 AM

I run after that magic my dear Tiaua! As a matter a fact from April till November I never miss a full moon rise! To watch it I go to the sea and wait for HER MAJESTY the moon to appear! Thank you for your genial comment! Lots of alofas to you too!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/28/2014 5:09:00 AM

Oh.....this dances and shimmers with beauty. My dear poet....if at all possible...you have outdone yourself.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/28/2014 11:26:00 AM

:-) To fengari enai oraia!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2014 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much for your cordial and generous comment agapith mou Eileen! Filakia!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2014 3:54:00 AM

- The Moon has a lot of magic .... that's for sure. - A lovely poem, Demetrios - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2014 8:39:00 AM

Anne Lise, unfortunately not all people see moon's magic! Thank you for your visit and comment! Have a wonderful weekend!