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The Lightning Strike

The cherub wrapped in rose - chaste chariot. A sprightly chain stirs charismatic horse Across the ages to answer one’s prayers. A demon with a plot to spare one’s prayers. Betide the lightning strike, toward chariot, but for the heretofore of God’s blest horse. Sole-kick displays golden crescent of horse. Claptrap scream of demon without a prayer! Away spurs the audacious chariot. Behold chariot and horse - answered prayers! 2/19/2019 A Tritina For Messina

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Date: 2/25/2019 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this energetic poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 2/24/2019 4:44:00 PM
beautifully descriptive Kim, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 2/24/2019 4:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Kim. so many great entries in this contest and yours is no exception. Very well penned. Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Charles :)
Date: 2/20/2019 6:02:00 AM
D i v i n e dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Demetrios!
Date: 2/19/2019 3:57:00 PM
Kim, a lovely poem, wonderfully penned ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 2/19/2019 2:29:00 PM
such a dazzling medieval story in few lines, kim... nice end line!....huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! xx

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