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The Legend of the Light

The legend begins before time begins In a far away land so beautiful and green; The child gushed out to the sunny world And was given the name Eileen! But the gal was not an ordinary child For she spoke poetry so supreme In that far away foreign land That was beautiful, vast, and green! Since then, the journey of words took off Writing to her became a daily routine; Places visited, people met, and life incidents All were summoned on papers agleam; She gave birth to visions beyond Any limits of time and sound That girl who was called Eileen! The spirits she evoked whenever she wrote Rejoiced her name in the holly ravine! The gal knew not she owns within her hands A power that runs like a stream, She poured her love to all who were around From when she was a preteen! But life was somehow severe and Compelled to change the scene; The young maiden travelled across the world Leaving hometown and forced to wean! Yet, the green fields she missed were revived In a lyric, a song, or a heart-aching scene; For the myth did engrave deep in the heart Of the gal named Queen Eileen, A light that surpasses any other light Just as her name does mean!! © Guru Jad 2013 * Dedicated to my Muse Eileen Ghali.. The greatest friend and supporter that anyone can meet!

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Date: 5/23/2013 8:34:00 AM
A very touching & tremendous dedication! This is how it should be. Wonderful!!!
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/23/2013 4:56:00 PM
Thank you my friend for your opinion.. it surely will add spice to the poem itself.. Wish you a pleasant day!
Date: 5/19/2013 2:06:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to an amazing person and poet. You aren't the first to write a tribute to her... she just has that affect on people. Great nature imagery and epic title!
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Date: 5/19/2013 4:22:00 PM
Timothy Hicks... I totally agree with you. Eileen is a walking inspiration for many! Enjoyed your comment. Thank you!!
Date: 5/15/2013 5:10:00 PM
I just wanted to thank you for all your recent lovely posts, Guru Jad. You are so supportive and sweet...and as for this poem! I will always and forever treasure it! :) Have a good night, my dear.
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Date: 5/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
This is only a glimpse of my admiration of your character... :D
Date: 5/11/2013 9:56:00 PM
Hello Guru :-) wishing a very nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:41:00 PM
Happy Mother's Day dear :D. Wish you the best
Date: 5/11/2013 9:41:00 AM
Hi Guru Jad....where are you hiding??? ;) I read this again and was touched once more by your sincerity! :) The wording is so so amazing...reminds me a bit of one of my favorite authors, Poe! :) I also enjoyed reading your responses to those who posted. You are so kind and sweet. Miss you. Yalla...show up!
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/15/2013 2:40:00 PM
Hey dearest... You know where I am hiding... University is taking most of my time... And the researches are never ending!!! :(... Miss you, too!
Date: 5/8/2013 8:44:00 AM
Dropping by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your tribute again. Looking forward to reading some new poems.
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Date: 5/8/2013 3:37:00 PM
Helloooo dear friend... Thank you for checkig on me... You are so kind.. Expect me soon... The mind is full of new poems :D. Have a great day.
Date: 5/3/2013 12:33:00 PM
Awwww, a beautiful tribute to one of my favorite PS poets. Eileen is indeed a wonderful person and poetess. :)
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Date: 5/6/2013 6:36:00 AM
Delysia.. Eileen is really inspiring.. She is my favorite poetess and friend! Thank you for commenting :D
Date: 5/2/2013 1:23:00 PM
Great work honoring Eileen..Enjoyed reading your very creative and complimentary work to her..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable..Sara
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Date: 5/6/2013 6:33:00 AM
Dear Sara, thank you for your lovely visit and comment. All the best!
Date: 5/2/2013 7:51:00 AM
Sooooo awesome....ditto every thing...she is a light in my life that shines through cyber space....thank you...
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Date: 5/2/2013 8:22:00 AM
Donna Jones, I am so happy you share with me the same feelings and admiration.. Wish you a great day! XOXO
Date: 5/1/2013 11:11:00 PM
you make her sound simply awesome and I'm glad you have such a supporter as this in your life. Was this in the friends contest? If not, it should have been!
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Date: 5/2/2013 4:04:00 AM
Andrea, she is actually an awesome person.. and very friendly. I am blessed to know her :D. And pertaining your question, it is not!! .... Thank you a lot for your comment. Wish you the best.
Date: 5/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
Yes, I am with you! She is a great lady and deserves to be your Muse, for she certainly is very inspiring! Great poem! Loved it! Thank you!
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thank you dear for your assuring comment. Your visits enlighten my heart to a great extent. Wish you the best!
Date: 5/1/2013 6:32:00 AM
You are deserving Eileen! Guru Jad I love your tribute to Eileen.
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/1/2013 7:43:00 AM
Dearest Richard,, thank you very much! Hope you have a wonderful day!
Date: 4/30/2013 11:45:00 PM
AMAZING! How sweet of you! :) Thanks ever so much! How did you know what my name means? Did I tell you? Yes, it means a great light. :) Guru Jad, you honor me. I hope I am deserving of this. Thanks ever so much for this lovely present of your thoughts and words. :) Keep writing. The world waits for more! Hugs!
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/1/2013 7:42:00 AM
Queen Eileen,, actually you deserve more than simple words for your character is a true treasure. I am glad you liked it, SuperMuse! Hugs!
Date: 4/30/2013 8:41:00 PM
Before reading this through, I thought to myself, the Eileen you speak about must assuredly be Eileen Ghali! Who else could elicit sure praise and such adoration!!! Of course it had to be Teacher Eileen! A GREAT tribute... she will absolutely love it! Kudos my good friend!
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/1/2013 7:39:00 AM
Honorable Sir, I deeply thank you for your precious visit. Wish you the best!

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