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In nineteen forty four on the third of September Is a date in my mind that I'll always remember It was the date of the last train to Auschwitz in Poland From Westerbork transit camp in the Nederland. The camp police and soldiers began kicking in doors People were just getting up and doing daily chores They ordered people to pack one bag, for a long journey And told them they were being moved to a camp of luxury. They escorted them to waiting boxcars and ordered them inside The soldiers used brute force and many children cried People were jostled and dogs were used too The people were powerless, there was little they could do. The space inside was limited and everyone had to stand And the journey would take, three long days overland They crammed about eighty people into each boxcar Then slid the doors shut and locked them with a bar. There was a slight chug and the train whistle blew And set out for a destination, to where nobody knew The air inside the boxcars was putrid and stale I feared old folk wouldn't make it because they were so frail. I looked around the boxcar at families, stood huddled together That look of fear etched in their faces, forget I will never The train stopped a few times for the train to refuel A man said they'll bring us food, I thought don't be a fool. The boxcar floor was covered, with a coating of lime And those who were barefooted cried all the time A few standing in the boxcar were looking straight ahead People next to them said they were cold, and I knew they were dead. The heat in the day was stifling and the nights were so cold I thought the world wouldn't believe it if this story was ever told A few were writing notes for those left behind In the faint hope that one day, somebody would find. From the gaps in the boxcar I knew it was day Everyone was oblivious to what up ahead lay The whistle blew twice and the train it slowed down Through a crack I noticed a building, was it a town ?. I could hear loud German voices and dogs were barking The train ground to a halt and I could hear boxcar doors opening Our door was slid open and we were blinded by the light Guards with dogs were everywhere, a terrifying sight. They got us all off the train and told us to form a line An officer said " you have to be registered, everything will be fine" We had to give our names and were told to go left or right Some families were separated, it was a harrowing sight. Everything going on around me was like a nightmarish dream In the distance I heard the train whistle and and a faint hiss of steam Then a loud chug chug sound as it faded away I realised hope had abandoned me and all I could do was pray. Written 10th April 2021 Last Train to Auschwitz Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann.

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Date: 12/8/2021 2:38:00 AM
You have brought to mind the trauma, the uncertainty and the mounting tension in the minds of the people who had to make that tortuous journey to Auschwitz, hardly knowing that they would never return !The great prelude to that genocide is once more replayed before the eyes. What horror ensued.....Terrific presentation, Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/8/2021 3:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, it is a dark stain on mankind, the horrors that were inflicted on those poor souls is unimaginable. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 1:12:00 PM
Tom, is it called empathy, those who can stand in others shoes and feel it all, then put all of those emotions into words, I would for one would never doubt your ability to travel back and forth in time either . . . : /
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/8/2021 6:30:00 PM
Yes . . .
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you very much Indiana, I'll admit it wasn't easy composing this one after reading survivors accounts of that train ride to hell, I tried to imagine what it would have been like. Their stories must be kept alive so those poor souls who didn't make it are never forgotten. Tom
Date: 6/13/2021 1:18:00 PM
congratulations again..very emotive write. You took your readers into that box car Tom.
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Date: 6/13/2021 1:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Nancy, definitely a dark chapter in mankinds history. What drives men to treat their fellow humans that way. Tom
Date: 5/6/2021 11:00:00 PM
Great emotional write, Tom, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/7/2021 4:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, poets and writers must never let this story die. Tom
Date: 5/6/2021 6:55:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations Tom, well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2021 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne for your return visit and congrats. Tom
Date: 5/5/2021 3:02:00 PM
So heartbreaking. Stripped of all, faith is everything. Powerful imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/5/2021 7:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Juliet, it was horrific what happened to those poor souls. Their story must be told and re- told so they are never forgotten. Tom
Date: 5/5/2021 9:59:00 AM
Congrats, well written, well deserved.
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Date: 5/5/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very much DM, we're all helping to keep their memories alive be it writing or art, we mustn't let their story die. Tom
Date: 5/5/2021 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. You told a wonderful story. So Sad. Have a blessed day with your win.......................
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Date: 5/5/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, I found it quite harrowing reading up on it but we mustn't let that story be buried in history. Tom
Date: 5/5/2021 3:44:00 AM
Congrats Tom on your win! Just a revisit to congratulate you!
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Date: 5/5/2021 4:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit and congrats Krish, Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 4/26/2021 12:03:00 PM
A powerful write Tom, whether they went left or right it was still the same. The world was horrified when they saw what had happened.
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Date: 4/26/2021 1:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph, you're right though, the one line lived longer initially but were either starved or worked to death. It must have been horrifying for those poor souls. Tom
Date: 4/17/2021 11:32:00 PM
Hello Tom ... this is a glaring example on how humanity can turn on itself. A very sad situation that should never be forgotten ever - thank you Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 4/18/2021 1:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Lindsay, they said it must not happen again but it does, Pol Pot, ISIS and Boko Harem. Mans inhumanity to his fellow man. Tom
Date: 4/16/2021 9:50:00 AM
A sadder poem I have yet to read, but what an absolute gem a brilliant write and certainly a top win for the contest Tom! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/16/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, it must have been horrendous for those poor people to suffer the way they did. Tom
Date: 4/13/2021 2:01:00 AM
This is excellent writing Tom! It is so important to let future generations know the horrors people suffered as not to ever repeat their tragic plight and suffering and death. I hope this is a trophy winner my friend. I am faving this incredible peace. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/13/2021 2:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie, never an easy subject to write about, but its down to us to keep their memories alive for future generations. Thanks too for the fave. I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 4/12/2021 2:16:00 PM
wow, you described the situation how it must have been really really well, Tom. I would not be surprised to see this get a win!
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Date: 4/12/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, its a very dark time in history for mankind, I tried to imagine what it must have been like to be transported in a cattle truck and having to stand for hours and days and being sent to a death camp where you were either killed on arrival or worked to death. Tom
Date: 4/12/2021 1:36:00 PM
Lest we forget!! Unfortunately, many are those who never learn from the past. Your narrative is an attention grabber, Tom; well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/12/2021 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Paul, the atrocities that were carried out during ww2 must never be forgotten, its only by books and indeed poetry that will honour the memory of those who perished for generations to come. Tom
Date: 4/12/2021 12:47:00 PM
From what I have seen in movies, this story in poetic form rings true. It was a horrible time and it is sad to know so many died when it wasn't necessary. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/12/2021 1:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, it was horrific treatment the Nazis inflicted on those poor people and anyone else who disagreed with their ideology. Tom
Date: 4/12/2021 2:47:00 AM
Wow great piece Tom. I was on the train reading that and now I can't get the boy in the striped pajamas out my head :( Those poor poor people. We must never forget them
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa its a dark time in history and sadly it still goes on today, the persecution of minorities. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 6:03:00 PM
This should definitely be a winner!! WOW. It's so sad and such amazing writing too... a breathless whisper of pain that drives home the truth that seems like it is too horrible for truth, too nightmarish for reality, too black for the sun to shine in and show the truth - this is so hard to believe - how could it have happened? It's a question that I know must have crossed many minds.. Your words are brilliant! I'm sure to be coming back to congratulate you in the future. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/12/2021 2:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Regina, its a dark stain on the history of Germany, they were quite ruthless in their quest to create their so called master race and even Germans who were against them were sent to death camps. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 10:19:00 AM
This is fabulous even if sad. How many people were killed just for pleasure. You wrote the events perfectly. If ever this administration should change its rules you deserve a POTD.
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Date: 4/11/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, im pleased that you enjoyed it. The Nazis and the camp guards they employed were sadistic brutes. Hanging those responsible was an easy way out for them. May they burn in hell. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 8:17:00 AM
absolutely stunning piece Tom, you take us right into that horrible place those many years ago. great imagery with insight and fine rhyme too. Blessings and hope its nice day with you, its been nice sunny day up here, Gordon
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Date: 4/11/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Gordon, its quite nice at the moment but earlier on we had hail showers. Hope your good weather continues. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 8:12:00 AM
And the Oscar goes to ...TOM! Superb writing narrating one of the most horrific periods of inhumanity that the world has ever known! I pray that humankind would never allow such abominable crimes to be committed again! A fave for me my friend, Tom! Blessings
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/11/2021 11:18:00 AM
Read about the Inquisition! The God of the Middle East in his glory! Aloha! Rico
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/11/2021 9:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, it made me shudder reading about it, how they could inflict so much horror in defenceless men, women and children beggars belief. Thanks too for the fave. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 8:08:00 AM
Great entry for the contest, Tom. Thanks for telling the chilling story. Still reverberates in my family's bones. ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/11/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, im not sure I even came close to discribing the absolute horror those scum inflicted on those defenceless people. But you're right, we mustn't let that harrowing story fade into history. Tom
Date: 4/11/2021 3:31:00 AM
Brilliant Tom! You put us all in that last train to Auschwitz! what horror!! how cruel can people get? Our poems have parallels but the feelings are mutual!! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 4/11/2021 5:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Krish, I tried to put myself in the shoes of a victim of the nazi horrors, It made me angry reading about it, when things like this happen the United Nations should step in straight away , never mind Borders and worrying about stepping on someone's shoes. Tom
Date: 4/10/2021 1:16:00 PM
tom - you have captured this horrible experience so well in your poem. i volunteer in a holocaust museum in nyc and we have one of the boxcars in front of the museum and many artifacts from that era. when i give tours to students, one item that always gets to me is a single red high-heeled shoe that was left behind by one of the victims. i always wonder about the woman who wore it and what happened to her...
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Date: 4/10/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much Ilene, its great work that you do helping to keep the memory alive of those poor people that suffered horrific treatment at the hands of the evil Nazis. I know I've probably only touched on some of the horrors they experienced as it was a lot worse. I can understand why you think of that poor woman, she was maybe a wife, mother, someone's daughter but she was a human being. It was upsetting reading about it but it has to be told so that generations after us will know the truth. Tom
Date: 4/10/2021 12:22:00 PM
An excellent write, Tom. One word made my hair stand up on my back. That word is REGISTERED. OUR GOV IS Doing THE SAME HERE.By vaccination. And closing down speech, churches on any one who dares thinks Conservative, Jews, Gypsies, Poles, Cathilics, Greeks were all part of a Cancel CULTURE BY THE WOKE NAZIS. Books and words were banned. Like now! Remember, all poets, they also took the JEWS guns away? AND now, Israel, the size of New Jersey, will have Arabs get money from the USA? The Jew haters never ended with the Holicaust...it just continues to burn. Our gov is more Nazi than ever. Good luck Tom. Panagiota
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/10/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Panagiota, your right, things like what happened back then are still happening today. We must remain vigilant. Tom
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