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Below is the poem entitled THE LAST DROP OF WATER which was written by poet Kim van Breda. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Clouds of despair will block out our sun
Trials and burdens each weighing a ton

God brings those clouds into your life
Not without conflict, discord or strife

Are they punishment or sent to refresh
Love incarnate through a Saviours flesh

Do not flee from raindrops that may fall
Let them linger enough for mercy’s recall

Grace will fall –heavenly drops from above
Till the last drop of water-a chastising love

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  1. Date: 3/6/2014 4:08:00 AM
    Ye, we are inspired by the same source! Beautifully done!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:35:00 AM
    beautifull i love it.... :)

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:11:00 AM
    Beautiful Kim--and sip - drink from their essence!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:00:00 PM
    Lovely --uplifting. Kim, you are an amazing writer... I love this poem, we are forever searching for love the light, and here your words speak volume.. I love it :) xox...Linda

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:27:00 PM
    deep stuff here babe...yes it aint all roses hey....lessons upon the way...

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:08:00 PM
    This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way the words flow, I LOVE the rhyme and tone. Wonderful indeed. :)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM
    wonderful write on mercy and love wishes

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM
    gracefully crafted with deep words that light the soul... onward, kim.. what a beaut!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Loved how you developed this one... Leading to the answer... wonderfully done.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Unbelievable spiritual piece I'm loving this ! So well done!!!!! Laura :)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Wonderful expression of your faith.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:34:00 AM
    This gave me so many goosebumps. Warm, fuzzy feelings abound while understanding the realities of it all. This was wonderful! So happy you posted something new, Kim! =D

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 8/15/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake-- inspired by recent trials and tribulations and the stormy weather here today in Cape Town. I have been busy formatting my second publication-- time consuming so haven't been writing much. Anyway, it hit the printers table today, so I am "free' to write once again.