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The Last Dance

The year 1917, my name is Jason, last night before the day Will you dance this dance, while the guitars play? And let your body move, with each string plucked Allow your red skirt to fly away not tucked Will you caress my face with each movements pass? Please let your mind burn it deep, like melted glass If your eyes can turn to fire, while the dance remains For tomorrow I go, I'll never complain This World War will cripple my soul To have this moment, on lonely patrol When I tremble in calm before the fight You will give me comfort from fears of the night When bombs burst around every day I'll find you in my mind, to wipe tears away And when I crawl and hide in a trench of death I won't forget this dance, my last request To me my dear it's a dance lasting So please dance it well, it's everlasting I lost my life on the eighth of June My last memory, was dancing under the moon Contest ....Past Lives 6/20/14

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:34:00 AM
You speak for a lot of people who lost their life on the battlefield. Who knows what memories passed through their minds at the last fatal moments! A very expressive and heartfelt write, Frederic. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:20:00 AM
Interesting past life experience, frederic, congrats on the win
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:06:00 PM
A fine win my friend. Congrats!
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:41:00 PM
Wow!!! What a vivid heartwrenching rendering of a past life experience. Many congrats on your top notch win,Frederic. bfn Elaine
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 7:57:00 PM
thank you Elaine for reading and for your kindness
Date: 6/29/2014 5:24:00 PM
Such a romantic touching write, Frederic. Congrats on a great win! hugs.. Arlene
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 7:03:00 PM
thank you so much Arlene for your kindness
Date: 6/29/2014 3:47:00 PM
Hi Frederic, congratulations on another well-deserved top win! This is such a beautiful write that has the power to transport the reader along with you to a different place and time. Pandita.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 7:03:00 PM
thank you Pandita for your kindness
Date: 6/29/2014 2:47:00 PM
Now, you have written a piece of significance...congrats and I hope you truly enjoy your success with this one. BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 7:05:00 PM
It's not significant Barbara but this contest was different, thank you
Date: 6/20/2014 11:25:00 PM
this is a heartbeaking one to think how true it must have been for many a soul that died in that war. a good write, my friend. And btw, I live near the Great Salt Lake now and that one definitely used to be an ocean!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2014 9:38:00 AM
Isn't that in Utah, thank you for the comment it was interesting to try and have a past life...I didn't want to be one of the major figures in history
Date: 6/20/2014 10:24:00 PM
This is just such a terrific write, I am curious about the background on this if any. You paint a vivid picture and make me feel like I am going back in time! great write!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2014 9:40:00 AM
no background, I'm old enough to have talked to a few ww1 soliders when I was young

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