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The Kite

Green, black, and red in hues,
We make many kites.
Fingers tighten the strings;
Kites soar to touch the sky.

As an elephant, moving its ears,
A kite in the sky
Sees men down, 
As small as puppets. 

Flying near the stars,
The kite looks on the lives
That meander
On the rural sands.

Soaring and soaring,
The kite eyes a black bird,
Which may be flying
Towards the shroud.

If I were a kite,
I could fly high,
Beyond the eye limit,
And feel ecstasy.

Dedicated to Debora Guzzi 

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  1. Date: 12/1/2011 12:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 8:40:00 AM
    Very nice perspective from the kite's point of view, Fab :) yes, one can definitely imagine the exhilaration that a kite might feel and I enjoyed this one, thanks for telling me about it :D

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 6:02:00 PM
    line 6 do you want [tail]?light & love

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 10:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 2:01:00 PM
    Interesting idea, Fabiyas. Congratulations on your honored presentation. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 11:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 3:57:00 AM
    hey Fabiyas congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 2:43:00 AM
    CONGRATS FABIYAS on your HM in Flying contest my friend with this excellent entry luv..

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 7:30:00 AM
    Good one for the descriptiveness brought to mind that kite riding the wind..I was going along on the trip..Glad that I chose this one to read this morn..I was delighted that you stopped by, read and commented on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 10:25:00 AM
    Hello Fabiyas, This takes me back to when I was a little girl. What fun we all had flying our kites. Thankyou for sharing this beautiful memory, As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 10:21:00 AM
    Very interesting write, I really enjoyed it