The Kiss

Kissing each other upon the ancient navel; fragment of a love.

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2016 7:14:00 AM

What a delightfully tender Haiku, Archontoula! A seven!

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/9/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios. For both the words and the seven!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 1:29:00 AM

AA, a sweet and passionate haiku. LINDA

Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 3/19/2016 3:40:00 AM

I wish I could post the picture that triggered it as well. It was ideed the navel of an ancient Greek vessel found near my hometown. the heads of two lovers kissing each other. Check it out here https://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=1693544614235268&id=100007392360879if you have a facebook account and hank you for your kind words