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The Hunt Not For Contest

Our guns were pregnant with bullet Bullet pregnant with desire to eat bush meat Our hunting dogs roamed up and down Pregnant with desire to eat bush meat We went as a group we were three and a half Three strong men and me the half I handed a cutlass and a bag What need of me, but with them I did surf I was so small then At times, me, they did shun But many a day the oldest of them said the boy be shunned none After a long walk we reached a fearful bush Our hunting dogs soon spread, a marathon in the bush What animal caused this run? None knew But sure, our hunting dogs were smart, no trash In a farther distance the bush was shaking We crouched with gun poised; it is coming Appeared dogs chasing a beaver; hissss Bellow expectation, well, after its, our legs was running Run and run and run, the beaver was stubborn Our bones were weary, the beaver was stubborn It went into a hole; we dug and dug and dug For the day, all efforts were barren Our hearts wore agbada of gloom Our mouths said no world nor hum The audience birds gave a mockery smile As we made our way back home In a farther distance along the way We were almost reached home, our stay Appeared a gad grasscutter With fury all hunters gave it a slay Easier to kill beneath our full force for Killing; then, downed to us the work of the creator Achieving a goal is not by one's ability We went off, the days joy was sure This was a real life story. It happened when we first relocated to our house in Ifeoluwa Fiwasaye area. The area was busy then, and hardly a complete building in our surroundings. For we, my parents were first to build house there. Six months after, we had a companion, but the people in the house were hunters. So I did follow them. Our effort on that day was immense to somewhat, we hardly walked home. However.... Agbada is big cloth, commonly wear during occasion. It is a Yoruba word.

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Date: 12/7/2016 1:01:00 PM
This is beautiful... so vividly written.
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:03:00 AM
You are a great writer i adore your God given talent am proud of you Richard Nnoli
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Date: 11/15/2016 8:48:00 AM
very PROFUND, Afolabi. Lainye
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Date: 11/9/2016 8:34:00 AM
I like the very ending sentence "Killing; then, downed to us the work of the creator"..God saw the need you had for food and provided the meat..I enjoyed reading your work..I did not know that I had missed commenting on your work..Sometimes I have time to comment on the comments on the poems and sometimes not..I do try to return all comments and read the person's poem..Thanks for all your visits..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2016 8:36:00 AM
My husband is retired now and is at home during the morning when I used to do my writing, reading, and commenting on people's poems so I have to just work it in when I can..Sara
Date: 11/7/2016 12:02:00 PM
sharp, eerie work well expressed, afolabi... huggs
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/7/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thank you for the comment.
Date: 11/7/2016 6:22:00 AM
So deep poem....Thank you for sharing it... A 7...
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/7/2016 4:17:00 PM
thank you for commenting, i appreciate it.
Date: 11/7/2016 5:31:00 AM
Interesting, informative, captivating dear friend, A.B. A seven!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/7/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for dropping by to read and comment.
Date: 11/7/2016 3:17:00 AM
I enoyed reading your poem, it kept my interest in the hunt and its difficulties - loved it.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/7/2016 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for liking it.
Date: 11/6/2016 5:49:00 PM
Gosh, it sounds like you were quite the hunter, Afolabi. Beavers?? Were you by a river?
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/7/2016 12:35:00 AM
Lol! Yes, thank you for you pleasant comment, I appreciate it.

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