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The Hearts Warmth

It is the gift when none was expected It is providing those things for those who are neglected It is a word when feelings are down A pat on the back though you fell on the ground Joining forces with those rejected Helping compleat so work is perfected The hearts warmth is in sharing a game The hearts warmth is in giving a name The hearts warmth an emotional theme A feeling of comfort receiving an offering

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/31/2010 9:22:00 AM

A warm heart heals the emotion and leaves comfort. Well said John. God Bless Phyl

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 12/29/2010 9:57:00 AM

very well written, has a lot of emotion within those words keep writing thank you for your comment however the poem had nothing to do with attractiveness of the person but being lost within a crowd. Crystal~X~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/28/2010 1:40:00 PM

great thoughts!!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/26/2010 9:42:00 AM

a hearts warmth that mends the abandoned & depressed.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/22/2010 1:43:00 PM

Soup mail in a moment, John

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2010 7:29:00 AM

I love the message of hope and kindness....such inspiration to all of us, to show the love and share a bit of ourselves. A lovely poem, John. Blessings this holiday season! Love, Carrie

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/20/2010 7:18:00 AM

A beautiful write John and so true as well.. ;)

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/19/2010 9:10:00 AM

Beautiful John, so heart warming. In my life to give is to receive the greatest reward. I'm deeply moved by this write... Lay

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/16/2010 11:47:00 AM

Hello John, This is beautiful! I love it, just so touching and the words are so true. Thank you for this As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 12/16/2010 9:57:00 AM

(It is providing those things for those who are neglected.It is a word.Joining forces.is in sharing a game.an emotional theme.) An amazing feeling, when these thing you mentioned begins to warm the heart, John. We sometimes neglect to do them, and why, when they promote such a feeling of warming accomplishment. Smile. Thanks for your graceful coment, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/16/2010 9:41:00 AM

That's a good heart you have, John. I'm a big fan of your poetry. Your friend, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2010 3:40:00 AM

You have written an exceptional poem here John iii. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love and blessings always, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2010 1:45:00 PM

Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I hope that you have many more for us to enjoy...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2010 12:36:00 PM

That unexpected gift that fell from your card last year really brightened my outlook. If anyone knows how to cheer a friend up, it is you, Sweet John! This poem has me smiling thinking of your loving and compassionate nature. Love you, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 12/15/2010 11:21:00 AM

beautiful!