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The Great Beyond

In the great beyond, we met once again After a life on earth, we had just passed We looked at each other and smiled only For language’s need, we had surpassed! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 November 2014

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Jack Ellison

Date: 11/14/2014 4:55:00 PM

What can I say! You are a poet... I am just a jester! I don't consider myself to possess half the talent you have! B-E-A-U-T-F-U-L my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/17/2014 5:58:00 PM

My friend you are a great poet and you humility makes you even greater! Thank you for your heartfelt comment!

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/13/2014 4:14:00 PM

Demetrios . . . Das is wirklich fabelhaft mein guter Freund!! Well-said and well-articulated about the "Great Beyond." A most definite "7" here my good friend. Best Always!! Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/17/2014 5:59:00 PM

Danke mein freund, Gary, for your precious visit and comment plus your generous grading!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/12/2014 6:06:00 PM

Very nice articulated my dear friend Demetrios! Enjoyed it. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2014 8:53:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Dorian, for your appreciative comment! Love and hugs to you too!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/12/2014 12:32:00 PM

True, true, true. Perfect!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2014 8:54:00 AM

Thank you, Merci, Danke!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2014 3:56:00 AM

- When we meet again .... with smiles and love - Beautifully my friend Demetrios - (The network was really bad yesterday, did not get into the poems - to post my little poem it went 23 minutes .... maybe it is some work with updates on the soup .... better today :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2014 4:24:00 AM

I have already congratulated you for your Haiku being chosen as a poem of the week, dear Anne-Lise! Thank you for your visit and comment!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/11/2014 12:14:00 PM

That will be awesome! Beautiful peek into the future Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2014 4:25:00 AM

Wait and see my dear, Brenda! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Dan Helppi

Date: 11/11/2014 10:10:00 AM

Your vision sounds nice Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2014 4:30:00 AM

I think you are right, my friend, Dan! Thank you for visiting!

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/11/2014 10:03:00 AM

No need for words in Heaven. I hear you. Shared smiles say it all! I liked your poem, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2014 4:50:00 AM

Dearest Darlene, the good thing about death is that he is the greatest democrat! No one is exempted! The worst thing, Homer, the ancient Greek poet said, is to be born and the best to leave this life as soon as possible! Being a philosopher myself I fully agree with him and Pythagoras and Plato and with our Christian faith that teaches us that death is not the end of life but the birth into true life! I leave you with the following though:Angel’s wings unfold/ Soul's anticipation mounts/ Paradise raptures!/ © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 NOVEMBER 2014