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The Glitch

In the past we said goodbye now in the future we say hello trapped in the vortex of time we found common ground to meet again separate worlds individual lives time did not erase a glitch in the matrix you reappear

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/23/2016 2:07:00 PM

Wow! Have you read "The Celestine Prophecies," Phyl? It explains the reasons why some people reappear over and over again in our lives. A thought-provoking, intelligent write!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/8/2016 3:14:00 PM

No I have not read that book but will have to have a look at it. I find it an interesting topic. l will have to get the book and read it. I have tried to leave reading for winter. If I get started I will be reading to much. Need to focus on more writing. love phyl

Paloma P

Date: 10/19/2016 8:26:00 PM

You say goodbye, I say hello, hello. Ah those matrix glitches make for good poetry. :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2016 11:41:00 AM

Hello to you too. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Have a lovely weekend.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/17/2016 6:14:00 AM

love these sentiments, Phyll. Hope you're well - I have this week off xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2016 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Jack. Have not been doing a lot of writing. Just can't seem to make my words come out right. Need a boot in the ---. Glad you have some time off.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2016 1:46:00 PM

- Creating new memories - a fresh start - A great poem, Phyllis - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2016 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise. No snow as yet how about you. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/13/2016 4:40:00 PM

This poem spells enchantment Phyllis. Timing is everything as they say. Lovely! 7 ; )

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Connie. Still without snow so I am smiling. love phyl