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The Garden of Adonis

And I talk to her heart of delight, and she shudders to think elsewhere The purchase of her soul, enlightened over here She has a glass face, so smooth like porcelain Created by a master-smith, not an extrinsic villain Open minded heart, that of delight my friend Loving like no other, that which depends Centered onto my own life force, she enters my life Crafted with a perfected twinge, to complete me my wife A single inkling of power, she shares it within me She works within the hour, sublime it can be Fascinating she brings, a lovely harpsichord Beauty deep within, the chorus and the chord Superimposed grandiosity, livened inside of me She sleeps onto my shoulder, her being is what I see Softly and gently she moves, covering my tenderness She creates motion, and has loveliness Come to me my sweetheart, live a little with me You can surface each emotion, surely you can be Directly honored by your immensity I direct my heart towards divinity Lovingly we control our destiny, over the tops of our delight She showers us both with love, and the hope of life is in sight And to this our love is shown Like the greatest ever star known
Russell Sivey Contest: Lyrics to Le Jardin d'Adonis Sponsor: craig cornish 5/20/2013

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Date: 5/22/2013 12:39:00 AM
You have such a way with words, my friend. Superimposed grandiosity? Yes... I should think so! I think you will always a be a romantic deep down... and it shows likes a shining star when I read your poetry.
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:51:00 AM
i am at a loss for words, russell.. this work is a coup de grace, so devastatingly flowing in its need to swivel on the melody of love... one of your bestest... much adored, my friend..:)hugggs
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:08:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Don't know about the contest though..I will have to look it up..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..I am glad that you enjoyed my foggy work..It was a foggy morn but has finally burned off...I hope that this is a good day for you..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
Adonis famous for his divine beauty, favored of the Goddess Aphrodite (Venus). Here we have his garden, the garden where the poetry of Russell flourishes: Impressive and majestic! Thank you my friend! Very well done!
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:15:00 AM
most beautiful and brilliant indeed:) love it :)
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Date: 5/20/2013 6:08:00 AM
Well done Russell, I am going to read these to the music now xx
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